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Tags: Absorption alice margatroid Belch Belly Bellyache bloating Bulge Burp Digestion Eirin Yagokoro eirin's shady new drug F/F f/multiple Female Pred Female Prey Fujiwara no Mokou Gas immortal immortal prey indigestion kaguya houraisan mokou no fujiwara Multiple Preys Oral Vore Same Size sentient ass sentient breasts sentient butt sentient fat sentient pudge Stomachache Story Stuffing touhou touhou project Weight Gain writing written work
Alice has a very very bad day after accidentally taking one of Eirin's shady new drugs.
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Back at it again with another long one, this time starring Alice! She's another favorite of mine, so I had a lot of fun with this story. I kinda hate how she's usually just reduced to being super horny for Marisa (even though I did that in my Eirin Boss Rush story, but that was done as a parody), so I wanted to focus on some of the stuff most people might look over about her character, like her being a sort of magical scientist who studies danmaku... and an interesting little lore bit that sets up this whole story.
I tried a different approach with immortal prey as opposed to my last story involving Mokou and Kaguya, this time involving some nice and juicy indigestion. I tried to write some good bloats and fats for this one... hopefully I succeeded.
Regardless, I hope you all enjoy!
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Posted by nyttyn 4 years ago Report
yes good perfect this is exactly to evertying i like
I don't have much to add rather then yes good.
Posted by DimentedChaos 4 years ago Report
tum good
Posted by ItsSongxing 4 years ago Report
i concur with nyttyn
yes good
Posted by Marchy81 4 years ago Report
Very good detail. I enjoyed it a lot! Keep it up!
Posted by DimentedChaos 4 years ago Report
Good to hear you enjoyed! Don't worry, I'll definitely be keeping the stories coming.
Posted by Aqualite 4 years ago Report
I quite enjoyed this. I'd say the different approach worked well this time.~
Posted by DimentedChaos 4 years ago Report
Always good to experiment with old ideas if it means coming up with a juicy new scenario. Glad you liked!
Posted by Azoon 4 years ago Report
i will add a third yes good, you are very consistent
Posted by pbysteria 4 years ago Report
Alice with indigestion and a huge stomach is the cutest thing.
Posted by DimentedChaos 4 years ago Report
Preds struggling with indigestion is something I need to do more of, honestly... Especially when it's girls that are normally polite and refined like Alice.
Posted by StygianSkies 4 years ago Report
My absolute favorite shit is that little bit you sometimes see at the end of fics like this where the pred, even though they prior to the experience couldn't even imagine eating someone, expresses curiosity or even outright desire at the prospect of eating someone else. Bonus points if it's someone they know like Marisa here instead of an arbitrary stranger.
Losing to an induced hunger when they ordinarily would be too meek or kind to be a pred is also high quality. This reminded me of that Patchouli Reaverbot story that never got finished.
Posted by colemercer 4 years ago Report
a nice piece lord dimented
Posted by MysteryFuto 1 year ago Report
I keep coming back to this one because it's one of the best touhou vore stories I ever read. Alice good.
Posted by DimentedChaos 1 year ago Report
Ahah, you flatter me. But thanks very much for the kind words! And I agree, Alice good, we need more Alice. Increase the Alice.
Posted by Paintalloons 2 months ago Report
Reforming prey that keeps adding pounds to the pred is such an underrated trope, 10/10