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She keeps spreading over your crotch, wet lips crawling up your stomach. She swallows, her throat flexes to accept your rigidity. Your balls drag over her tongue, deeper, closer to the edge. You’re desperate to release, eager to make her swallow you like she did the night you met her. You yearn to pack her overfull stomach with cum, let it slosh between all the crevasses, douse the brunette inside and drown her.
Here’s another plotless piece of writing about your girlfriend, Sophia. Enjoy!
Part 1 here: https://aryion.com/g4/view/584520
~2k words
Thanks to Frogcubus for proofreading!
Posted by threk 5 years ago Report
I do love the idea of the prey being eaten in a changing room with someone waiting for them outside, and the pred just walks right by them without the other person realising.
Good to see the guy's progressed from one-night-stand/snack to boyfriend shenanigans, these are a fun couple :)
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Posted by Progressive 5 years ago Report
It's a fun and easy scenario to run, for sure. You can probably lay about 50% of the blame for this story's existence on Erecant and their A High Stakes Game-- I'll admit that I spent far too long powerleveling early just to see how long I could survive in Zoey during the first encounter with her. My high score was 72 hours.
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Posted by threk 5 years ago Report
Haven't actaully played that, will have to give it a go at some point.
Is the Zoey character the same as AdjectiveNounCombo's? I.e. the one that was in a BigBig comic with a very similar scenario.
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Posted by Progressive 5 years ago Report
I think they're different characters. Here's the link to what I'm talking about:
https://aryion.com/forum/viewtopic.php?f=79&t=44706&hilit=a+high+stakes+game
Enjoy!
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Posted by sadcat 5 years ago Report
72 HOURS???!!! I am still on my first!
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Posted by Progressive 5 years ago Report
Sorry! I went back and checked the my save file—I forgot the game uses half-hour increments. So it's actually 98 half-hours, or just over 48 hours.
... Now I actually want to try for 72 hours :P
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Posted by frogcubus 5 years ago Report
As a note for the likely distant future: I rebranded a little, but I’m the proofreader! :)
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Posted by Progressive 5 years ago Report
Good point.
If anyone sees a typo, it's this guy's fault.
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Posted by AnAccount 3 years ago Report
This is probably my favorite short story on this site, has been for some time now. Surprised I hadn't left a comment any of the dozen other times
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Posted by Progressive 3 years ago Report
Thanks! What about it makes it your favorite short?
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Posted by AnAccount 3 years ago Report
The tags haha. It's just what I'm into. The way they go about and then get away with it is just the right amount of taboo.
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