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Always be careful what you promise or bet, someday somebody is likely to win your wager. Most of us didn't really care for school, but then again, few of us were offered a huge incentive like Theodore. Maybe teachers should consider more radical teaching methods.
This story is a commission I wrote for heromc - https://aryion.com/forum/memberlist.php?mode=viewprofile&u=17978
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Posted by no one 5 years ago Report
Holy cow! Well done!
Posted by IndifferentEmpath 5 years ago Report
Thanks!
Posted by unicorn 5 years ago Report
Human on human is rarely my thing but this was pretty great! The way Lara gradually got into it when she realized he might succeed was really hot <3
Posted by IndifferentEmpath 5 years ago Report
Thanks! Prey that change their mind and get into it themselves are pretty great. Kind of hard to make it convincing though.
Posted by ToweringValkyrie 5 years ago Report
Really great story. Been loving all the content lately <3
Posted by IndifferentEmpath 5 years ago Report
Thanks, I aim to please!
Posted by heromc 5 years ago Report
I give this an A+!
Posted by IndifferentEmpath 5 years ago Report
Well, it doesn't get any better than that!
Posted by byzantine27 5 years ago Report
Hehe, I'd love to see Ted's next lunch :P
Posted by IndifferentEmpath 5 years ago Report
Well it's entirely possible you will someday. That cheerleader was interested.
Posted by Randomdude5 5 years ago Report
I vote for a sequel too
Posted by coldwar368 5 years ago Report
Oh do you do commissions? I love your stories and would love to commission you.
Posted by IndifferentEmpath 5 years ago Report
Feel free to send me a PM about it!
Posted by TW 5 years ago Report
Nicely written with good pacing. M/F is not always my fav, but this one hit the spot.
Posted by IndifferentEmpath 5 years ago Report
Thanks! Glad you enjoyed it.
Posted by Randomdude5 5 years ago Report
This gave me an idea. If a cheerleader told the guys the team that whoever scored the most points would get to eat her it would could something similar to the prisoner's dilemma where the guys on the team would compete against each other and not the other team and cause her school's team to lose.
Posted by IndifferentEmpath 5 years ago Report
It would certainly be a conflict of interest!
Posted by Odin1366 5 years ago Report
Ok, quick question, because this always pops into my head when I read you're work (or any work that involves vore being a common thing). If the main prey is mostly females (with some males being hinted at), then how has the human raise not been extinguished? If all the young and fertile females are eaten, with only a sliver of survivors, how does the world repopulate? Or better question, how long has this been a thing with the world, is it a recent event or has it been happening for eons?
Posted by IndifferentEmpath 4 years ago Report
It's a recent thing and some women are just really good at having kids. One woman having 10-20 kids makes up for a bunch of meals. Don't worry too much about it!
Posted by theo12hero 4 months ago Report
hey its me ;r