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A very special commission fic for my friend rexlou that I had done a few months ago and just haven't posted anywhere else!
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Posted by Dos 5 years ago Report
Very well written and I thoroughly enjoyed the first half of the story. However the second half of the story kind of fell short for me. While in some people's eyes the Dragonite sweeping and eating everything and Caroline eating Cynthia makes sense. But I think because I'm a big Pokemon nerd and Cynthia was one of my first waifus I would have gotten more enjoyment of Cynthia devouring a big meal and the Pokemon battle being more even. And while I don't blame you I'm pretty sure with Togekiss vs Dragonite Moon blast or literally any other fairy move (or ice beam which I'm pretty sure Togekiss can learn) would of been a better choice for fighting Dragonite. Overall very well written and greatly enjoyed the beginning but the second half of the story was less enjoyable.
Posted by RexLou 5 years ago Report
Any second half woes you have can honestly be blamed on me, lol. I love Cynthia a lot but Carrie Girl and Marsha Boy need to eat too~
Posted by grz01 5 years ago Report
Mmm very hot thanks