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[Comm] A Petty Thief's Punishment By DimentedChaos -- Report

Here's another paid piece from me, this time comm'd by the great  Kainan! Give them lots of love and other nice things. This story entails the misadventures of a certain mischievous witch trying to steal another technique from the terrifying Yuuka Kazami! Poor Nitori unfortunately gets roped into Marisa's scheme, too. Things don't go so well for either of them when they get caught by the flower maiden.

Kainan also drew a pic based on this story, so go check it out! https://aryion.com/g4/view/589174

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Emerald1115

Posted by Emerald1115 4 years ago Report

Yes! Very good stuff, thank you for this wonderful piece.

DimentedChaos

Posted by DimentedChaos 4 years ago Report

Heh, I figured you'd appreciate this one. I told you she'd get her turn one day!

nyttyn

Posted by nyttyn 4 years ago Report

am glad elly showed up, elly good.

well at least marisa and mima are together forever now.

v good!!! yuuka good pred... gotta wonder now what kind of memnto she'd take from shinki if she' wiping out the PC-98 anyway...

DimentedChaos

Posted by DimentedChaos 4 years ago Report

Elly is very cute and needs more love.

Thanks as always for the compliments! As for what she'd take from Shinki, hmm... good question. Her hair beads, I guess.

Aqualite

Posted by Aqualite 4 years ago Report

Amazing as always. Honestly, stories with Yuuka tend to quickly draw my attention.~

DimentedChaos

Posted by DimentedChaos 4 years ago Report

Yuuka definitely makes for great pred material. Plenty of juicy and creative scenarios to be had with her personality and powers!

PrismLaser

Posted by PrismLaser 4 years ago Report

Poor Nitori, getting eaten because Marisa dragged her along.

I also love how you describe the curves of the girls (like Marisa's peachy bum).

DimentedChaos

Posted by DimentedChaos 4 years ago Report

Thanks! Always important to describe how curvy the prey is before they get added to the pred's curves.