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A morning jog sends thrill-seeker Stacy sprinting for her life when her newest phone app throws her into a game fraught with horrific and erotic danger. Her pursuer teases her imagination, Stacy can't spare the time to glance back. All that exists is their panting breath, the crunch of gravel, and the chase. Losing is permanent, but would that be so bad?
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Posted by ryanshowseason3 5 years ago Report
Absolutely fantastic. A mistake or two in proof reading but completely forgivable.
Tag! App is great but could use a bit more fleshing out.
Honestly though I'm fishing for criticism this was easily the best vore story I've read in the last month.
Wasn't sure if I wanted reforming or not in the end. Did the prey know she'd come back or not? I think not, is reforming up to the pred? Using remains? Answering those kind of questions in the course of the story can further amp the tension.
And tension seemed to be the goal here.
Posted by RachelBabe 5 years ago Report
I want to see a sequel. Amazing work.