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Been a while. Had half a dozen half-finished stories lingering around, so I figured since I had some free time I would knock one out and post it. Enjoy!
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Posted by joeburp22181 5 years ago Report
Looks promising! Can't wait to read it!
Posted by joeburp22181 5 years ago Report
Was awesome just like I expected. Enjoyed also how you left the ending wide open for another additional event. Remind me not to complain at a moaning woman ever again... it might be to my own folly~
Posted by D3adZ3d 5 years ago Report
Thank you! Glad you liked it!
Posted by glargicus 5 years ago Report
Great job man, although I would have liked more of an examination of the effects on her body from digesting Darrin. (I'm imagining she's a bit taller and muscular.) I really like Yvette as a character, she has exactly the kind of attitude when it comes to filling her belly that appeals to me. Could do with a little bit of a proof read, (you change tense mid-paragraph a few times, and somewhere you have something like 'hgr' instead of 'her') but ultimately it was a thoroughly enjoyable story despite those minor quibbles.
Posted by D3adZ3d 5 years ago Report
I rushed this one out without properly proofing first and it shows lol. I got another project I wanted to start and just wanted to get this out there. I did enjoy creating Yvette and might bring her back, but bigger and badder of course :)
Posted by StormElla 1 year ago Report
I love this one
Posted by totalloser 1 year ago Report
Excellent description of a massive titty fuck. Well done!