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Okay, so, new story, here we go.
Here's some Lunasa stuff because I think the Prismriver Sisters are underrated as heck, and Lunasa's my favorite of the three so I figured I'd do a little something with her. I'm pretty proud of how this one turned out, all things considered.
I'm thinking maybe I'll do fics featuring the other sisters, and I do have some vague ideas in mind, but who knows. There's a project I'm chipping away at right now, so that might come afterwards.
Also, here's me dabbling into stuffing/more emphasized weight gain. I might do some more WG-focused stuff if this goes over well.
also huge shoutouts to DimentedChaos for proofreading and general help with this thing
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Posted by Aqualite 4 years ago Report
Absolutely love this. You detailed the digestion nicely.
The fact that Sanae seems to be next in line is quite the tease, too.
Posted by fleshlord 4 years ago Report
thank you so much for the kind words!
yeah, f in the chat for sanae. at least she's gonna be going to a good cause (lunasa's hips)
Posted by sadlyknight 4 years ago Report
To be honest in the pcb they didn't really show they're power and to me if your a ghost you for one have several weaknesses. Komis can just kill her with little effort. I do agree their underated but then again they get a good amount of artwork from Japanese artists. I do perfer MoF and up games personally less rng. Kanako is a brutal god if you look into it. Would intervene if lunasa tried to do anything and could easily kill her. (She's at a much big power level than lunasa could even dream of) Reimu cannoniticly has cheat codes that allow her to keep fighting until she wins. I know any sort of logic kinda destroys stories like this and don't get me wrong i like vore i just wish it had a bit more logic. I will not said the even more powerful beings like the Moon sisters(they are op as hell) Those 2 can fight everyone singlehandly. Well thats about it. Going to go do something. Good story though, I know many people who are experts at the lore. One looked at the lore though makes this not stand. Prism sisters aren't all that strong considering lunarians and Underground goddess who can erase her from existance. I could go on and on talk about others that can easily crush her but i don't think i need to. Have a nice day.
I am interested in seeing you improve. I keep my writings to logic. So i am looking forward to your next story see you later.(if you want to talk to me just PM me.) I hope this post isn't like huge since im really passionate when i write.
Posted by fleshlord 4 years ago Report
yeah but it's kink fiction, canon power levels are useless here
Posted by nyttyn 4 years ago Report
sorry friend it's too late
touhou power level discussion hijacks even vore.
Posted by fleshlord 4 years ago Report
nooooooooooooooooooooooooo
Posted by Ananta 4 years ago Report
but they feel very satisfying when they are successfully implemented, in my opinion anyway. whether for an obvious outcome or a satisfying reversal.
Posted by fleshlord 4 years ago Report
yeah, it can be good for role reversal stuff
Posted by colemercer 4 years ago Report
oh my oh my my lunasa pred? you pick my favorite prinsriver sister jeje another splendid job my friend with this i love how you make the digestion detailed and how do you make the pred after the digestion is perfect this artwork deserve a aplause of shia labeouf: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PSZy6lGgOcI
pd:i hope see more parts of this of lunasa eat the other instrument girls
Posted by fleshlord 4 years ago Report
thank you, i'm really glad you liked it so much!
Posted by colemercer 4 years ago Report
yeah i knew you have talent of this stories i hope you keep it up like this
Posted by Draconatedz 4 years ago Report
Incredibly hot story, you have a wonderful flowery writing style that blends with touhou characters like peanut butter and jelly~
Looking forward to anything and everything you write next!
Posted by fleshlord 4 years ago Report
thank you so much, it definitely means a lot!
Posted by StygianSkies 4 years ago Report
This was stupendous. It's not often a story about a fat pred with this much exquisite detail put into the swallowing process is released, and you combined it with a really cute feeder/feedee relationship and a rare pred archetype. It was fun to see Lunasa maintain her relaxed attitude even as she shoveled a mountain of food down her gullet and digested a full kappa. Definitely look forward to all your releases.
Posted by fleshlord 4 years ago Report
thanks a bunch! yeah, i always felt lunasa had a lot of untapped potential as a pred, with her apathetic, stoic attitude and such, which also makes for a nice dynamic with the normally bombastic raiko. but either way, thank you so much for the kind words!