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So I decided to update my OC Chiaki's appearance a bit and so... here it is.
recap:
She is a college student.
When she was 16, she became aware of her ability to shrink people.
Without thinking about the consequences, she swallows people who pissed her off, then leaves the rest to her stomach and pay no attention to their fate.
She has never been caught with murder, so far.
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Posted by kokage 4 years ago Report
Thank you~
Updated the report to make it clear that the victim was shrunken person.
Posted by Cactaur98 4 years ago Report
Awesome work! I’m always looking forward to these posts
Posted by kokage 4 years ago Report
Thank you!!
Posted by Adder4118 4 years ago Report
Like I always say no witnesses
Posted by kokage 4 years ago Report
She doesn't pay much attention to her surroundings, so she might get caught one day...
Posted by Adder4118 4 years ago Report
Oh i thought she was eating a witness and the one who got ate was already ate
Posted by Keokas 4 years ago Report
Damn... Love that form
Posted by kokage 4 years ago Report
(▰˘◡˘▰)
Posted by PhantomAsh 4 years ago Report
The perfect crime
Posted by kokage 4 years ago Report
If she's smart enough to dump her *evidence* down the toilet, not the public space.
Posted by PhantomAsh 4 years ago Report
Very indecent of her XD
Posted by joeburp22181 4 years ago Report
Is it really murder if it's vore though? Who cries for a pig or files a police report when a cow gets devoured for its meat? I would say what is food and what is not, is all in the eye of the beholder. Live animals get swallowed whole all the time both on land and in the sea. What some countries deem barbaric, are normal ways of life for others. Successful hunts are sometimes what make or break surviving!
You be you Kokage OC. And don't let the world tell you anything!
*Purposely pisses her off to see what she might do!* >:3
Posted by kokage 4 years ago Report
In their world, tinies are an acquired condition. So they are treated as normal human being and it's illegal to eat or kill them, but not everyone actually agrees with that...˘◡˘
Posted by joeburp22181 4 years ago Report
>:3
Posted by Novalori 4 years ago Report
She's cute~
Predators with no remorse over what they do can be pretty great ~
Posted by kokage 4 years ago Report
a normal girl studying hard and spending her own life but inside of her stomach someone meeting the end of his or her life. this contrast is awesome.
Posted by Novalori 4 years ago Report
It is, a cute girl on the outside, a poor (or lucky depending on who you ask) soul being processed in the inside.
She dosnt look so bad tho. I'm sure she's nice if your on her good side. Would still head pat
Posted by Altimos 4 years ago Report
Haha, beautiful scenario... I'm pretty sure she'll get away with it <3 <3 <3
Posted by kokage 4 years ago Report
Or she's going to gobble up police as well? '0'
Posted by ShinjiIkari 4 years ago Report
The last minutes of his life must have been pretty unpleasant~
Posted by kokage 4 years ago Report
I'm sure it is~
Posted by 349qg853437tr48tr 4 years ago Report
This article would likely be shrugged off as a hoax or prank (unless it’s a well-known and common occurrence)
Posted by kokage 4 years ago Report
Yes it's actually everyday things in their world.
Posted by CoinToast 4 years ago Report
The text is still a bit awkward, but the rest is nice.
Posted by kokage 4 years ago Report
Can you suggest an edit? so that we can improve that script!
Posted by CoinToast 4 years ago Report
I am not a native speaker so take this with a huge grain of salt, but here are my suggestions:
"This person was found as bone fragments buried in feces at B University, A-ku, Tokio on May 5." -> "This person's remains were found as bone fragments buried in feces at B University, A-ku, Tokio on May 5."
Generally on the english language, a person is different from his own corpse. You are no longer talking about "him", but about what is "left". The body is an object that belongs to him, so to speak. What you wrote here could work, but something tells me it sounds a bit weird.
"The body is shrunk and badly damaged that it is difficult to identify it" -> "The body was shrunk and so badly damaged that it is difficult to identify it."
I'm not sure if changing the "is" for a "was" is necessary here, to be honest. But the "so" is necessary if you want to use the word "that" in this case.
"If you know someone who was working/studying at the university, and one's whereabouts since then are unknow, please contact the following agencies." -> "If you know someone who was working/studying at the university, and whose whereabouts since then are unknown, please contact the following agencies."
"One" is *very* rarely used as pronoun, and it means something akin to "a person", or "a man", or sometimes "I". None of these apply here, so it cannot be used. "Whose" refers to the "owner" of a thing, in a similar vein to "who". And because english is funny that way, "whereabouts" is treated as an object, with an owner. It is "his" whereabouts, so the question is "whose".
I hope this helps, but once again my native language is not english so maybe I'm missing something obvious or overcompensating on something trivial.
Posted by kokage 4 years ago Report
Wow, that's really helpful! Your explanation of the difference between a person and whose corpse, in particular, is very helpful. I used to treat them as the same thing. Thank you for correcting my script and for the detailed explanation on it.
Posted by Bright 4 years ago Report
Nice swallowing pose.
Posted by kokage 4 years ago Report
Yay '◡'
Posted by whatisthissheet 4 years ago Report
Good design she looks cute! Like the backstory too.
Posted by kokage 4 years ago Report
Thanks!
Posted by jklq 4 years ago Report
Lovely~
Posted by kokage 4 years ago Report
♡
Posted by Williamso17 4 years ago Report
Well you just got an immediate follow dam love stuff like this!!!!
Posted by kokage 4 years ago Report
Thank you! <3
Posted by vyvince1997 4 years ago Report
Pretty bold of her to leave the evidence in the open like that :D