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Commision for SPECTRUME
The girls of Monster Musume get a little hot and bothered on a full moon and Kimihito isn't around to satisfy them! Gasp!
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Posted by ShadowSun 4 years ago Report
Good question actually. Who *did* Smith take? And what happened to Rachnera? So many questions I need answers too. Either way, great story!
Posted by PhantomWolf 4 years ago Report
LMAO the world may never know!! (Aren't I just a big tease)
Posted by delet0b269gv26 4 years ago Report
I imagine Miia and Rachnera given the former was in Cerea and the latter probably fed herself to Kuroko.
Posted by MugenNoSaga 4 years ago Report
Gotta admit, I wasnt into the story too much early on but the more I read, the more it was grabbing me. There are some stuff it would have very interesting to see happen at some points but overall, good story, yet left me with hungry for some more, specially about Miss Smith (the best girl).
About criticisms I have with this mainly around the big spaces between sentences and/or paragraphs.
Posted by PhantomWolf 4 years ago Report
Thank you for your honesty and critique, yes that's an issue I'm working on rectifying, and as for Smith being the best girl? Hmmm well she IS hot but I'll have to disagree with you about her being the BEST lmao
Posted by MugenNoSaga 4 years ago Report
I see that we are having an "Agree to disagree" situation here. I want to point out that the story cuts away when she and giant spider (Arachne) are gonna go at it, then cut back just in time when she is coming out of the horse *WITH* what I want to think the bird and fish inside her stomach, which she had to take out from the spider's belly. Anyway great story once more :D
Posted by PhantomWolf 4 years ago Report
Thank you again friend (By the way my personal fave is a tie between Tionishia and Suu)
Posted by MugenNoSaga 4 years ago Report
Tionishia is such a giant cinnamon roll of a girl, very easy to love too, can see why she is tie with Suu, which I know very little aside being a slime and probably the one character with the highest potential for lewd scenarios of many kinds.
Posted by PhantomWolf 4 years ago Report
If I may what is it about Smith that you find attractive?
Posted by MugenNoSaga 4 years ago Report
Physically speaking, she does have many things I do love to see in women then we have her lazy attitude and still being a good leader for her squad (love when she abuses of Doppel's powers to beat those pigs by her own). And finally, really love how she sounds (Yu Kobayashi did a good job voicing her). It may sound simple, but sometimes thats all I need for a character to make me like her/him/it a lot.
Posted by ReptileKing23 4 years ago Report
Well Chum... This was a nice change up of things, not familiar with this anime
Posted by PhantomWolf 4 years ago Report
It's a Harem themed Anime if you're into that, I do believe it's on Hulu you should check it out
Posted by ReptileKing23 4 years ago Report
I'll be sure to do that! Seems like an interesting anime
Posted by Allard-Liao 4 years ago Report
There's also the manga it's adapted from: https://mangaowl.net/single/1618/monster-musume-no-iru-nichijou
Posted by Moonsniper 4 years ago Report
Is there going to be a part two I’d love to see more of this
Posted by PhantomWolf 4 years ago Report
This was a commissioned story. Any continuations are subject to the wishes and approval of the client
Posted by rotta287 4 years ago Report
Consensual orgy of nonfatal vore? I like this.
Posted by PhantomWolf 4 years ago Report
Won't be the last of it you see :)