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The Second Competition By ZeldaNoVorsu -- Report

Today is my good friend  techtician's birthday! He was nice enough to give me two drawings for presents on my birthday this year, so now it's time for me to return the favor. This is a continuation of the story he asked for for Request-mas last December, where Lissa and Lyn from Fire Emblem eat people and then see who can make the bigger bulge in their pants afterwards with the mess. This time, they are even joined by Tiki!

Go whish  techtician a happy birthday on their birthday story, A Special Treat, while I have you. I'm even in the story, though only in the beginning thanks to Zelda, which should be enough context for you to want to go read it.

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Simplespectator

Posted by Simplespectator 4 years ago Report

Well, at least lucina got some bandit friends, in theory at least. While diapers aren’t really my thing, fire emblem is, as is good writing, so kudus friend. Thank you kindly.

ZeldaNoVorsu

Posted by ZeldaNoVorsu 4 years ago Report

Eh, this time I don't think they stuck around. Their just some rando bandos while Lucina was actually someone important to Lissa. If she ate someone else important, then Lucina might have a friend.

techtician

Posted by techtician 4 years ago Report

Oh that was wonderful~ My girl getting the win was a pleasure and who knows maybe I'll have to add her to Chronicles at some point~

ZeldaNoVorsu

Posted by ZeldaNoVorsu 4 years ago Report

I figured she should get the win for your birthday story, where in the original it was always a toss up.

techtician

Posted by techtician 4 years ago Report

And I thank you for that~ And a naughty girl she was~

ZeldaNoVorsu

Posted by ZeldaNoVorsu 4 years ago Report

Well, you're welcome! I figured you'd like her to be a bit naughty as well.

techtician

Posted by techtician 4 years ago Report

I happen to really like that since she would totally be a brat. hmm maybe I should write that...

ZeldaNoVorsu

Posted by ZeldaNoVorsu 4 years ago Report

Maybe you should.

techtician

Posted by techtician 4 years ago Report

Heheh will do~

The K

Posted by The K 4 years ago Report

I love the term "cheek bloating" burp. It's perfect. Another good story you made.

ZeldaNoVorsu

Posted by ZeldaNoVorsu 4 years ago Report

It's something I came up with in reference to my love of the dramatic bloated cheeks some artists and animators use to show mega belches.

The K

Posted by The K 4 years ago Report

I see. Which artist and animators use the bloated cheeks for mega belches?

ZeldaNoVorsu

Posted by ZeldaNoVorsu 4 years ago Report

Oh, um, I didn't have specific examples in mind. I just know that I come across it occasionally.