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Tags: Belly Belly bulge blue hair crop top curly hair Delphine Lilas F/F Female Pred Female Prey grabbing gurgle Implied Digestion Internal View Ms. Lilas Onomatopoeia Oral Vore Same Size Short Hair Short Pred smaller pred Stomach Stomach Noises Struggling Struggling prey Swallowing taller prey teacher teacher pred
Part 2 of Ms. Lilas' introduction. Small lady, but big stomach :3
Still trying to figure out how to make the background less... flat and dull. Any suggestions?
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Posted by Rawr534 4 years ago Report
Maybe add more background? Since it’s a school maybe a bookshelf or a few desks/ posters of why schools kool
Posted by Hozomat 4 years ago Report
I thought about that, but it's hard to add it on a single-layered paper x)
Posted by SherlokKirya 4 years ago Report
Finally she is in ! I wonder how loud her screams are, can anyone her them ?
Nice coloring on internal shot !
Posted by Hozomat 4 years ago Report
Yay, it only took a week to swallow her! '3'
Her skin might not be thick enough to silence that meal, but I'm sure our little teacher knows the school's shortcuts well enough to avoid the janitors on a Friday evening ;)
Posted by SherlokKirya 4 years ago Report
Ohhh she is smart pred. As expected of teacher hehe
Posted by doomed 4 years ago Report
Try doing close ups , as well as adding a bit more dialogue. Stuff like that distracts from the background
Posted by Hozomat 4 years ago Report
Too much dialogue would cut the pace, or even overwhelm the reader. Close up can be tricky if I use perspective, but it would be an upgrade, yes.
Posted by Sharktooth 4 years ago Report
For the background trying adding some simple things. You can even make them slightly blurry like it’s outta focus if you don’t want extreme detail.
Maybe a picture a chak bored.
Maybe some desks?
Plus adding an actual floor would add wonders.
I will say the comic is absolutely amazing!!