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Just an idea that popped into my head and I ran with it. Just a quick piece, so it's a bit less polished than some of my other stories. I didn't plan on it having two endings, as I wrote ending 1 first.
I didn't intend for it to be that heavy, then I wrote ending 2, so be warned that one is graphic.
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Posted by Altimos 4 years ago Report
Not bad, second ending imho was loads better...
I'm not very much for willing prey, but when that willingness turns to unwilling, especially when it wasn't what they thought, is just as good as completely unwilling prey :3
Posted by Ediblestranger 4 years ago Report
Thanks for taking your time to give me your input! I do actually prefer the second ending as well, even though it wasn't actually part of my initial thought process with the story.
Posted by Furryvoreonly 1 year ago Report
Hey, I have a question. There are no spesies tags on your post, and Judy's description is never given. I really don't like human preds, so I felt kinda uneasy reading this, not knowing what species Judy was. If Judy is a predatory mammal like a fox or something, then id have to say that I relay like this story of yours and agree with the other commenter that I like the second ending better. If Judy is human, well... The story is still well written, it just definity isn't for me in the slightest.
Posted by Ediblestranger 1 year ago Report
I think when I wrote this I intended them to be humans as this was written before I started writing furry stuff but as I only really gave basic descriptions I don't see why they couldn't be furry. If it helps you enjoy it, feel free to imagine them as foxes, a fox and a mouse/hamster, etc. I do seem to enjoy writing furry stuff a bit more than human stuff, even though I haven't written much lately I do have some ideas I might dive into in the nearish future.
Thank you for your comment.
Posted by Furryvoreonly 1 year ago Report
Your welcome!
I'm fine with human prey personally, it's just human preds that weird me out. I don't know why, but I find them disturbing on some fundamental level. Maybe its my brain going "Humans can't do that!". Its like some serious uncanny valley shit. It also has to do with the fact that cannibalism really weirds me out. I would be disturbed if a human ate a human in the same way as if a fox anthro ate a fox anthro.
I also don't like predators eating other predators but that's just me. Thanks for responding to my comment like this. It was really nice of you :)