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Tags: assisted vore Beast Boy Belch Belly bulge Belly humping belly play Burp Cruel Pred Digestion Digestion Noises Drool F/? feeding Mass Vore Masturbation Micro Multiple Preys Raven (Teen Titans) Shrinking Prey Swallowing Teen Titans Throat bulge Throat Hold throat play Unwilling Prey Weight Gain writing
A Teen Titans vore story taking place years after the show.
Word count: 7,805
Beast Boy has a note from Raven promising him a surprise, but what will this surprise be? Beast Boy hopes it's something romantic, but he may be getting more than he expected when he brings Raven's mysterious, moving box to her room.
Features lengthy swallowing scenes of shrunken prey along with some mushy digestion and belly play. Seriously, this thing is mostly vore.
(Again, this story takes place well after the show in order to make the characters well of legal age).
The Eka's doc reader doesn't play entirely nice with my formatting, so I suggest downloading the document if you're interested in reading the piece.
I've been drafting a comic around this idea for a few months and after taking a break, came back to it feeling that it had missed the mark. I decided to write up a story in order to better establish the general tone and narrative of the story, as well nail down the character's personalities. I might have overdone it a bit considering the length.
Big shout out to Noisekeeper for helping me proofread the story, and for pointing out some hideous adverb usage. Really helped clean the piece up and make big improvements.
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Posted by coldfire1200 4 years ago Report
Welcome back
Posted by joe354 4 years ago Report
oh welcome back Tsavo! and interesting story you got here~ Also hope that comic goes well mate!
Posted by asdn534Sans 4 years ago Report
YES, love that you’re back
Posted by Tsavo 4 years ago Report
Heeeyy me too!
Posted by snowkid0011 4 years ago Report
Welcome back:D
Posted by whatisthissheet 4 years ago Report
Simply fucking incredible.
The way every action is described and how detailed it all is, it's simply amazing. The dialogue, the scenario just fantastic.
The "crushing" part was the best. I could go on and on but don't want to put a wall of text here.
Just brilliant, don't have enough words for praise. What a return.
Posted by Tsavo 4 years ago Report
I'm happy you enjoyed it. I had fun writing it, and it was good practice as I don't often do creative writing.
Posted by somethingsomething2077 4 years ago Report
It has begun
Posted by Greg432 4 years ago Report
The Legend returns
Posted by zappereye 4 years ago Report
Any way to link the thumbnail source? Great work!
Posted by Tsavo 4 years ago Report
Source? Mine. It's actually an excerpt from the comic I'm drawing that roughly follows this story. It will be posted in pieces as I rework bits and pieces of the pages, and of course, finish the others.
Posted by KVCArts 4 years ago Report
This was a damn good read~♡♡♡♤
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Posted by KVCArts 4 years ago Report
the ? Were suppsoed to be hearts... oops
<3 <3 <3 <3 <3
There
Posted by Tsavo 4 years ago Report
I'm glad you enjoyed it!
Posted by bigboy1992 4 years ago Report
I would definitely like some more of these two characters. They are cute together
Posted by Tsavo 4 years ago Report
Beast Boy and Raven Stan since the show aired man.
Posted by Vish 4 years ago Report
Love it
Posted by MidNightOwlArt 4 years ago Report
To clarify Eka DOES allow underage WRITING so you can make them younger if you wish, as long as you make the underage character(s) clear (description and tags)
As for the story i’m going to be reading it soon, hope it good.
Posted by Tsavo 4 years ago Report
Oh I'm aware, I just had no interest in doing so. I hope you enjoy the story!
Posted by Hivelord 4 years ago Report
Glad to see you are back, missed your stuff so much.
I hope things are better for you now.
Posted by Tsavo 4 years ago Report
Things are getting back to normal, and I'm doing well. Thanks for the good wishes, and I'm glad you liked the story!
Posted by Hivelord 4 years ago Report
Glad to hear it. Definitely looking forward to more amazing stuff from you. Definitely looking forward to the day you will be able to take comms again, also really curious and excited to see this personal project of yours.
Posted by Elgringobandito 4 years ago Report
oof that was really good!
Posted by doomfister 4 years ago Report
A good effort bud, read over this this morning, you still have your literary florishes and flair :)
Posted by Tsavo 4 years ago Report
Thanks! Means a lot coming from you.
Posted by Nugget1138 4 years ago Report
So good to see you again! wonderful writing as expected!
Posted by Tsavo 4 years ago Report
It's good to be back I'll say!
Posted by The K 4 years ago Report
This was a really amazing read.
Posted by Tsavo 4 years ago Report
Glad you liked it. We need more throat play around here!
Posted by Crusades 4 years ago Report
I logged in just to say welcome back.
Tis been a minute, hope you've been well :^)
Posted by Tsavo 4 years ago Report
Not sure about "well", but I've been I'm still out here breaking records for most days I've been alive and that's good enough for me.
Posted by curiousss 4 years ago Report
I MEAN, YOU ALREADY KNOW, THIS SHIT IS THE BOMB
Posted by Birichino 4 years ago Report
Boy, that's a REAL power play. Sorry I took so long to read, but you're really good at this! The characterization didn't feel distorted, the story flowed well, and the vocabulary kept things interesting! If I had to cite room for improvement, it'd be the phrasing of a few spots, but that only came up sporadically.
Posted by antiquewarehouse 2 months ago Report
Amazing!!
Posted by Tsavo 2 months ago Report
This story is so old I can't believe anybody still reads it. It's very self indulgent.