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Tags: ?/F animal pred Bunny Bunny pred Digestion Fatal Female Prey gochiusa Gochuumon wa usagi desu ka? Is the Order a Rabbit? large prey larger prey Macro Prey Manga Time KIRARA Micro pred Micro/Macro Rabbit Rabbit pred small pred smaller pred Smaller Pred/Larger Prey Tiny pred Unwilling Prey Weight Gain
Syaro has always terrified of rabbits. Perhaps she's been right all along...
With the beginning of season 3, this series was brought back to my attention, and what better way to celebrate than to write a story about one of its wonderful girls being digested and turned into flab? This time I picked on the unfortunate Syaro, who at times seems to get more than her share of misfortune in life. Sad for her, but on the plus side she made that bunny very happy.
Please comment and let me know what you think! :)
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Posted by HisashiHinata 4 years ago Report
I loved the story! I enjoy tiny pred quite a lot, as well as bunnies, so I suppose that's what lead to it. I do think you could've tried adding more description to the weight as well, but that's just my own kinks showing.
Posted by No-One 4 years ago Report
Thanks for reading!
Tiny pred is fun, and the idea of a harmless rabbit eating a girl whole is partiuclarly amusing to me. Syaro's always been terrified of the things, so I figured why not make use of that?
Not big into fatty content myself, so I mostly tend to gloss over any weight gain beyond mentioning that it happened. There was a plan to include a couple lines after Syaro's viewpoint went out, talking about the bunny resting on top of a belly so big that its feet couldn't reach the ground, but somewhere in the writing process I lost track of that and it didn't make it in.
Posted by HisashiHinata 4 years ago Report
I see. Well, it was still a good story. Great job, mate.
Posted by 338856 4 years ago Report
Thank you! Your GOD! I want you to write more!
Posted by No-One 4 years ago Report
Heh, I wouldn't go that far, but thank you for reading! I'm glad you enjoyed it. :)
Posted by CrimsonShadow 4 years ago Report
I haven’t seen the anime, but this was still a good read.
Posted by No-One 4 years ago Report
Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it. :)