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A hungry girl in a bear suit encounters a young village girl in danger in the woods. This is my idea of how Yuna and Fina's meeting might have turned out had their first conversation gone just a little bit differently.
So... I actually wrote this story a few weeks ago, based on my reading of the novels and manga for this series. I held off on posting it because the anime is coming out and I figured I should give people a chance to see the scene I was altering so that they'd recognize what I was trying to do here.
Then I watched the episode that contains said scene.
...You know what, folks, don't watch the Kuma Kuma Kuma Bear anime. I have never seen an anime butcher the source material this badly. Whether you're there for fluff or comedy or action or cute girls doing cute things, they've cut out nearly all the best scenes you could be looking for, and replaced them with... well... nothing.
Just... go read the manga if you want to understand what I based this story off of. Or the novel, if you're willing (the webnovel is available online), but the manga should be an easy entry point for most folks.
Um... anyway, I hope you can at least enjoy this story, regardless! Please comment and tell me what you think! :)
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Posted by GoneForever 4 years ago Report
Another great story :D
Posted by No-One 4 years ago Report
Thank you! :)
I was surprised at how easily I could turn this scene in a vorish direciton that seems almost reasonable: as if it actually could have gone this way.
Posted by epicBUDDERtroll 4 years ago Report
I hope you do make a little series out of this one cause this was nice
Posted by No-One 4 years ago Report
Thanks for reading! :)
As always I never make promises about future content, but it certainly is possible.
Posted by epicBUDDERtroll 4 years ago Report
It would be cool to see some internal perspectives on some stories too
Posted by No-One 4 years ago Report
Do you mean from the perspective of the prey? Several of my other stories have that, if you want to check them out.
Posted by Bright 4 years ago Report
I saw that scene myself and I'm glad someone wrote it haha
Posted by No-One 4 years ago Report
I'm glad you liked it. :)
Fina's "are you going to eat me?" just felt like a blatant invitation for some vore content. It served as a perfect jumping-off-point for this.
Posted by Belthasar 4 years ago Report
I kind of like the anime, though it was really weird the way they put what should have been episode 3 as episode 1. Then again, I haven't read the manga, so...
It seems pretty plausible that she could get skills like that to me, it kept giving her other bear skills.
Posted by nomnomvore 4 years ago Report
THis one was great! It would have been nice with some reflecting on Fina's part in the stomach, and maybe how she felt being digested, but was really good story!
Posted by nomnomvore 4 years ago Report
If you make another one uniting Fina with her little sister, that would be adorable~
Posted by No-One 4 years ago Report
I'm glad you enjoyed the story! :)
I've certainly thought about where things go from here, but in the end I haven't really hit the spark of inspiration I need to make something out of it.
Posted by Badfurson 3 years ago Report
I enjoyed the story! Though, I feel needlessly obligated to say that I also very much enjoyed the anime, regardless of how much it left out from the manga. It’s in a similar boat with Familiar of Zero in that regard to cut content-but I think both shows still have great value.