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A beautiful young woman makes her ASMR performance extra special by loudly eating a chocolate bar with a special topping.
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Posted by lllll1337 4 years ago Report
Very nice! You effectively communicate the horror and hopelessness of the situation from Britney's perspective while showcasing some wonderfully casual cruelty from Ji-yeon's perspective. The internal maw and stomach descriptions are a highlight for me, both because of how well they paint a sensory picture and how they further strengthen the contrast between the perspectives. Many of the descriptive elements you use are things I've never thought of myself. "Light and darkness pulsed through the giant woman’s mouth like a slow strobe..." ahh, that's so good. I'm feeling inspired to try some new things with my own internal scenes now, haha.
Posted by supernova 4 years ago Report
Thank you very much! What a kind comment!
Posted by lllll1337 4 years ago Report
You're very welcome ^^