Five mermaid teenagers use magic to go up on land. One of them, however, doesn't turn out quite the same as the others.

This story is vaguely inspired by episode 8 of Bermuda Triangle Colorful Pastrale. Unlike the previous story I wrote for this series, in this story characters are much less likely to scream in horror at the sight of one person eating another, and much more likely to find it super-erotic.

Anyway, in episode 8 Serena ends up transforming into a loli due to her body reacting poorly to the magical medicine used to transform mermaids into human form. Her shell-sister, Fina, absolutely ADORES the new, tiny Serena, and reacts... well... basically like I've described in this story, except without the actual vore. She even says she wants to eat Serena up. Obviously, once I'd refreshed my memory of it by rewatching the series recently, I couldn't just let that go by without turning it in a vorish direction.

Now, as should hopefully be clear, this is NOT a followup to the previous story I wrote. This is set in the same universe, but in a different continuity. The reason for that is because the attitudes in the previous story, Bermuda Triangle Colorful Snack, are very close to how they are in the anime, in terms of how things like vore would be looked upon. In that story Sonata was horrified to discover that she'd eaten another mermaid: murdering the girl. Had anyone else known what she'd done, they'd have been horrified as well. The only followup I could see to that ended up being very depressing, and I don't LIKE writing depressing stories. I write these stories because I want to enjoy them, and I post them here because I want other people to enjoy them.

Anyway. I need to wrap up this long description.

Please comment and let me know what you think! :)

(PS: I actually mean that. Please speak up. It helps boost my self-confidence.)

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