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Mai and Yui are relaxing together in the Maple Tree guild house when suddenly Yui gets an idea.
Here we go, a series I suspect more people will know. I've wanted to write something for this series for a while, but could never quite get the idea to work out. Probably because I kept trying to focus on Maple: as the extreme omnivore of the cast it seems obvious she'd be the pred in a story for this series, but in the end it may just be too obvious. When I first started the idea that became this story, I'd initially thought I'd have Sally eat Maple, and the twins would be watching from hiding and be unable to resist trying it out themselves. However, before long my mind would only focus on the twins, and so things ended up as they are.
I admit, I took a few liberties with that final scene. We know almost nothing about these two outside of the game: we don't even know if Mai and Yui are their real names. However, rather than confuse things, I had them stick with those names even after logging out.
Anyway, I hope you all enjoy this! :)
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Posted by Wanderingspirit1333 3 years ago Report
Finally, more Bofuri!
Posted by No-One 3 years ago Report
It really amazes me that it's gone almost completely untouched. Given Maple's tendency to chow down on living creatures already, it seems like it wouldn't take any effort at all to extend that to her fellow players. And if she can do it, so can others.
Anyway. Thanks for reading! :)
Posted by CrimsonShadow 3 years ago Report
I mean, between the Devour skill and her Atrocity form, she’s already chowed down on other players. It just didn’t result in any weight gain. I thought a fun idea for a Bofuri vore story could be that the devs try nerfing these skills by “encumbering” the player who does that, by giving them a large stomach and lowering their speed stat. Then when Maple tries it out, since her speed is 0, her speed lowering results in it glitching into the max value, allowing her to go on an unstoppable rampage.
Posted by No-One 3 years ago Report
I don't tend to count Devour, since it's her shield doing the eating rather than her, but yeah she's certainly eaten others in Atrocity form. I tend to prefer human-on-human vore, so that's what I meant when I made the previous comment. So far as I can remember, she hasn't personally eaten another player while still in human form.
Posted by CrimsonShadow 3 years ago Report
Yay! More Bofuri! And the twins too, what a nice bonus! I wonder if the fast digestion has anything to do with their maxed attack and minned defense?
Posted by No-One 3 years ago Report
...Sure, let's go with that. ;)
(Actually I was just thinking of it as a game mechanic: like how Maple ate more than her own weigh in hydra meat, but didn't get overstuffed. Canonically that probably just means that the idea of eating too much hasn't been implemented in the game, but since this is a vore story I turned it into fast digestion.)
That said, I like the idea that the twins' high attack power makes their stomach acids more powerful, and their zero defense allows them to be digested faster. If anyone ever eats Maple they'd better hope digestion bypasses her defense, or they'll be stuffed full for weeks. :)
Anyway... As I said above, this series already toys with the concept of vore just by itself, so it's an easy pick for this sort of thing. And the twins are probably my favorite characters in the series, so I knew from the start that I'd have to include them, no matter how the story went.
Posted by Cactaur98 3 years ago Report
NON FATAL!? YOU BETRAY ME!!!
Actually it was a great story regardless
Posted by No-One 3 years ago Report
I actually spent some time thinking about that. As you've probably realized by now, I don't generally do non-fatal vore. But, in the end, I find that story trumps personal taste. It just makes sense for these characters to try this out in the game rather than real life (at least at first), and for them to respawn from being eaten the same way they respawn from being killed in any other way.
If it's any comfort, my idea for how this would go forward from here is that, after eating each other several more times in the game and becoming addicted to it, they'll eventually try it in real life, at which point we'll properly be down to only one twin.
Anyway, thanks. I'm glad you enjoyed it. :)
Posted by MugenNoSaga 3 years ago Report
My only question is: what did the other girl got for skill?
Posted by No-One 3 years ago Report
They both meet the same conditions, so they both get the same skill: a 4x multiplier to their highest stat. Which, for them, is strength, as the only stat they've raised at all.
Posted by MugenNoSaga 3 years ago Report
Gotcha, thanks for the answer!!
Posted by NoWayOut 3 years ago Report
Not a fan of Non-fatal vore but still read it regardless because I like what you write and am a big fan of yours. Unfortunately I still didn't like this story because of the Non-fatal nature of it, but I can at least appreciate that it was well written.
Posted by No-One 3 years ago Report
I very much prefer fatal vore myself, so I understand. As I said in a reply to another comment above, I just felt that this being non-fatal was unavoidable this time. Don't worry, I should be back to writing fatal vore stories soon.
Posted by nomnomvore 3 years ago Report
Really loved this one!
Posted by No-One 3 years ago Report
Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it. :)