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A couple uses their university's yearly Halloween costume contest for unintended—and dubiously ethical—purposes, at least until one of them realizes there's somewhere in particular she'd rather spend the night.
Tags contain some very minor spoilers, so, you know...
One of (hopefully) two Halloween-themed shorts I'll be releasing this year. This one's short and fun, at just over 2.7k words. I'll be posting the other one late on the 31st (if I can actually finish it up in time). It also might just break the non-fatal streak I seem to have found myself on. We'll see.
Thank you to Progressive for proofreading.
I don't have much to say for this one, other than if you've read through my idea lists, you might recognize a certain concept in play here. I'll definitely need to explore this in the future with something a bit more in-depth.
Enjoy!
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Posted by UnclearConscience 4 years ago Report
You’re a very, very good author! Fantastic writing
Posted by thecheese01 4 years ago Report
Thank you very much!
Posted by AllRightAllNight 4 years ago Report
This is top tier. I love the subtlety in Jess's abilities.
Posted by thecheese01 4 years ago Report
Hey, thank you! This was a fun one to write.
Posted by rugli 4 years ago Report
This was fanastic read but I think you might want to do a follow up on this as I think you can do more with these characters considering:
""Mmm, well good, because you're not getting out until tomorrow. Deal's a deal." She paused. "Then again, tomorrow's Sunday, so maybe you need an extra extended stay."
Posted by thecheese01 4 years ago Report
Thanks! No promises on a direct sequel, but I'll definitely keep the setting and characters in mind if I'm in the mood for some more casual safe-adjacent vore-ish fun.
Posted by rugli 4 years ago Report
In any case I also intended to qoute this line "Vicky fixed Jess' belly with a distinctly appreciative look, tinged with perhaps the faintest hint of jealousy. That was an interesting observation. Jess had never really gotten the impression she was all that interested, but perhaps an invitation might be in order some day after all."