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Amazon's Crown By donkdonknever -- Report

Uploaded: 4 years ago

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Amazon finds an odd, definitely cursed tiara and puts it on. Sorceress lets her, confident that she'll be begging for help.
Things don't really end up that way.

This fic was commissioned by https://twitter.com/countzio

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Firebird22

Posted by Firebird22 4 years ago Report

I feel the transition is a bit abrupt, but overall really fun.

The descriptions of big amazon and sorceress are great.

donkdonknever

Posted by donkdonknever 4 years ago Report

Thank you! I actually wanted the time skip to be abrupt, just happening out of seemingly nowhere.

Firebird22

Posted by Firebird22 4 years ago Report

It makes sense. I just feel like maybe a couple more lines leading up to the time jump would fit. Just my opinion though.

Imagine how big the three women are going to get