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This is a short little story I wrote on my phone during a burnout on my usual style of doing things. The intent going into this was to write something shorter than what I usually do, while cutting out a lot of...for lack of a better word, fat, and just focusing on what I specifically like; which in this case would be character interactions and post-vore stuff. Pace is quicker, and overall it's just simpler. It won't be the norm all the time, but for the time being, yeah this is a lot more comfortable to write. Just getting on the computer drains me...
It's also an excuse for me to finally start writing Railgun stuff, I adore Kuroko and Misaka as a pairing, and Kuroko's powerset is just perfect for someone who loathes having to write the actual eating process at times. I wanted to get out a story before the end of the year, and well...there you go! It's out, it's done. See you in the new year.
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Posted by Amagi2 4 years ago Report
*teleports inside u*
heh, nothing personel, onee-sama
Posted by Kiritaba 4 years ago Report
Why do I get the exact opposite feeling..
Posted by rotta287 4 years ago Report
That is such a perfect twist on a funny meme that you earn one online cookie for it.
Posted by Cactaur98 4 years ago Report
Good stuff! I’m always up for some railgun Vore
Posted by Kiritaba 4 years ago Report
Thank you! It's been one of those things I got into...a lot, during this year, so I'm happy to finally take the plunge. More to come, probably. Got a few ideas kicking around.
Posted by Gillsley 4 years ago Report
I expected the third part to the Fuuka trilogy, but what we got was even better! Hooray to railgun!
Posted by Kiritaba 4 years ago Report
I'll be honest, I tried writing it, I really did. Just got to a point where there were so many ideas being thrown my way that I didn't feel confident in my original plan anymore, and just didn't know what to do.
Posted by Gillsley 4 years ago Report
That's alright. I (and probably everyone on this planet) would prefer a story to be postponed until it's quality can be guaranteed rather than have a story out now to a resounding "meh". And also how can I complain when more railgun stuff is posted? Amirite?
'Till next year!
Posted by Kiritaba 4 years ago Report
Yknow, it's kinda funny. Beginning of the year, it was like "Man, I don't have anyone to talk to about Railgun, it feels really niche", and uh...guess not! Ain't complaining one bit, it's great to finally express my love for the series.
Posted by MugenNoSaga 4 years ago Report
OMG!! You have no idea for how long I was thinking about why there hasnt anything related to Kuroko teleporting somebody (or herself) into Misaka's stomach.
While short and to the point, it leaves me wanting for a bit more but many thanks for delivering this.
Posted by Kiritaba 4 years ago Report
More than happy to add to the ol' Railgun pile. The teleportation was...primarily because I really, really didn't feel like writing a drawn out swallowing scene, to be honest. If I had done things at my usual pace and length, probably could have been one, but for what's essentially a...quick bite of a story, a quick blip just seemed like the most comfortable option for me. But I'm really glad you liked it, always feels good when people respond positively to these stories.
Posted by MugenNoSaga 4 years ago Report
Agree with the swallowing scene part, sometimes I just don't want to go through that process alone. Butt then again, is fun to try different things (tries to hide lots of unfinished ideas because I just keep going and going and getting burnt out eventually).
Posted by Kiritaba 4 years ago Report
Ugh, I feel you on both. I've got like three or four unfinished things atm, just keep getting burned out while writing them.
Posted by MugenNoSaga 4 years ago Report
Something that was forgotten to point on the previous comment is about the proof reading or fixing/correcting possible spotable mistakes or typos. Butt I can't just release something that way, at least try a bit.
Posted by Kiritaba 4 years ago Report
With this at least, that's why I'm glad I used Google Docs, it basically points out mistakes live, saves me a lot of time I'd have to send going over things later..
Posted by rotta287 4 years ago Report
I like teleportation vore, not very common. Favorited for that.
However I am one who never liked Kuroko and Misaka as a ship. In the show Kuroko is portrayed as sexually assaulting/harassing Misaka as a form of comedy, which is nothing but off-putting to me.
Posted by Kiritaba 4 years ago Report
Well, I appreciate the support regardless,
I've been seeing opinions like that a lot lately, though, and honestly, yeah, I understand! Kuroko can be a bit too extreme at times, go a bit overboard, and while normally, it's something that would put me off, I hate Nozomi's antics in Love Live for example, in this case... I've just become a bit...desensitized to it, I guess? It's just something that doesn't bother me as much as when I initially started watching. Not exactly sure why.
Personally, it's one of those times where my own headcanon kind of takes over. While her antics can't necessarily be excused by any means, I think it still comes from a place of genuine affection, and she's so wild because she's trying so hard to get Misaka's affection herself. I feel if the two ever did get together, Kuroko would eventually mellow out, as there'd really be no reason for her to act as crazy anymore - she'd have what she wanted.