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Having a little too much fun with the results of her first binge, Saten quickly finds herself wanting for seconds, and Kongou's prim and proper lackeys are too delicious-looking not to corrupt.
I had way too much fun with this one, although I don't know if it quite came out how I was hoping it would. Saten's personality has always made her seem like a good candidate for a womanizing casanova to me, and mixing that with vore allows for some powerful bedroom shenanigans.
Also lookie here, I uploaded something sooner than a quarter year after the last upload! This must be a new record. Don't get your hopes up for it being a trend.
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Posted by No-One 4 years ago Report
Baseline Saten is a bit too innocent to be a womanizer, but give her a bit more confidence (as you did) and I can see it.
Another good story. :)
Posted by StygianSkies 4 years ago Report
Yeah, it's a pretty common doujin setup for her. I did amplify it a little more than usual here though, but I think it's still fine because the bulk of people are "a bit too innocent" to digest another living human without some major stimulus. I tried to tie it to her inferiority complex to help with that
Posted by Plutia 4 years ago Report
Excellent~
Posted by StygianSkies 4 years ago Report
Your support is much appreciated!
Posted by Cactaur98 4 years ago Report
This is just incredible, I’m practically speechless! This story is way better than it has any right to be. In fact it’s probably my favorite I’ve ever read! Phenomenal job!
Posted by StygianSkies 4 years ago Report
Wow, uh, thanks!
Posted by Assimilation 4 years ago Report
The domineering personality that she fully loosens at the beginning third is so titillating. You've done a good job using it to establish the audience's expectations and thus build tension for the middle third, when we're viewing from her prospective preys' perspectives (say that five times fast). The way you flip quickly through the events of the night but slow down pacing for whenever Awatsuki is making considerations/decisions about Saten really puts us readers in her headspace and sets up the payoff at the climax of that section.
And god, oh god, the final third makes me so eager to see the last two chapters. I'll try my damnedest not to get my hopes up for another upload soon, but I fear it's already too late. ;)
Posted by StygianSkies 4 years ago Report
I think I'm actually leaning towards a really long third chapter more than a third and fourth right now. Hard to predict when it'll be done now that the busy season is up in full force, but it's definitely more a fun outlet for me than a source of stress, so I manage little additions here and there every few days.
Thank you so much for writing this out, by the way. Your comments are an absolute joy to read.
Posted by AbsoluteVL 4 years ago Report
A little late to the party, but I still wanted to commend you on a phenomenal story! Your pacing and contextual setup is ridiculously good. I don't have much else to say other than this one of my new favorite stories! I look forward to whatever you have next :)
Posted by StygianSkies 4 years ago Report
Hey, thank you so much for the kind words, and the watch while I'm at it!
You're definitely one of my favorite artists on the site, in no small part thanks to your ability to pack detailed character dynamics into a scene. Feelings are mutual regarding whatever you're planning to put out in the future, and I hope I can eventually find the time to crank out more narratives myself.
Posted by 74828273 3 years ago Report
Lmfaooo you made Ruiko Saten into Patrick Bateman, this shit’s great
Posted by StygianSkies 3 years ago Report
I fully intend to make her victim count comparable ;)
Posted by TableManners 3 years ago Report
The scene in the hotel is completely amazing. Your portrayal of vorish seduction is simply masterful...
Posted by StygianSkies 3 years ago Report
There's little more exhilarating than throwing out over a decade of education and etiquette just to add some flab to the thighs of a street rat you met mere hours ago~
Posted by IddlerItaler 3 years ago Report
Impressive story, really!
Posted by StygianSkies 3 years ago Report
Thanks for the support!
Posted by RachelBabe 3 years ago Report
I like what I see! I hope you write more soon~
Posted by StygianSkies 3 years ago Report
I'd love to get back to it. Life's just been in the way this last mess of a year. Thanks for the support, really, it means a lot
Posted by gauro5 2 years ago Report
any continuation?