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Had some loose plot ideas for sequels. But distractions and lack of energy (along with grinding on some other pet projects, etc.), had this simmer for a bit. Then some real life purge on a video upload service happened, which well….
Led to an idea to escalate things ‘a little’. So that in a roundabout, dark manner. This can let me experiment with a different ‘style’ of digestion in more real size detail, as much as give me potential ‘hooks’ for all sorts of future predation. Whenever it is said, “commission” based, or self-defence. Especially given these trying times...
Truth be told, I’d have probably have done something like this eventually, had this series continued, after shoving the whore with as many miniature “clones” to be fed to her ovaries. But better having a little variance on biological digestion here. Hopefully, the next story in this snippet series would have me play around with generic names for a change. Because after all, you’ll eventually need an Andersen, to hunt our nameless whore. Or a max123, to ‘totally’ not sponsor this. :P
For the record, max123 has not given me any coin, or trades for this. Just figured, with how his name tends to creep up on the sub-category of Vore I like; figured out as a “generic” name, it’d be nice to throw in… soon...
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Posted by UBFanDrake 4 years ago Report
ohh i hope this continues to have sequels it's getting interesting
Posted by LemonBarb 4 years ago Report
Assuming, I don't do a different snippet instead.
But more seriously, I've done some set up for some future conflict, and possible prey/possibly some 'hack' of a story. As much as by plot bunnies, having some possible stray thoughts on how "The Whore" will continue her services towards her viewers.
Above all else, I like the thought of doing a bit of a 'twist' to the typical Unbirth genre. All time did, was hit me with an idea on 'how' to do a take on Same Size unbirth, to what I hope would be an interesting degree.
Posted by abccba0671 4 years ago Report
The way she unbirths people is disgusting though. Turning them into eggs and then birthing? Pooping them out is sort of an ugly image.
Posted by LemonBarb 4 years ago Report
Normally, if you've read the previous snippets in this series, it's less 'transformation', more 'integration/absorption' by ovaries. It's only in this case, as it's her first time doing Same Sized vore, to that degree. "The Whore"s ovaries ended up absorbing a lot more mass... To the point where it led to in some biological sense, 'regurgitation'.
In contrast, better discharge, or 'cum' digestion compared to some of the post-post digestion scenes. If anything, by and large I prefer post digestion, to be the complete absorption of everything 'of' the prey themselves.
Posted by UBFanDrake 4 years ago Report
in short, she's still learning and when she is better at it there will be less of that?
Posted by LemonBarb 4 years ago Report
Partly that, and if I do a sort of prelude to it, still getting used to some new biological modifications, her I think, implied scientist friend, or sponsor implemented on her own body, to enable Same Sized Unbirth, and ovarian absorption. If I do a sequel take, maybe she'd have the discharge boost her own body internally instead, or her ovaries grow in size until their 'fat', in a biological lens? But eh, I'll just wait and see how that goes, narratively speaking...
That said, if throwing speculative commentary, everything a 'part' of her eggs/ovaries, contains nothing but her own DNA. Everything organic devoured, is absorbed, to a digestive/nutrient degree, unless by some miracle, there's a layer of protection barring the absorption process, such as plastic or metal.
Now, what else. Other than long term consequences, of having her ovaries so used to larger servings, she might start developing sexual cravings, for larger servings?
Posted by Groblek 4 years ago Report
Interesting, you’ve definitely escalated things with this one. And that was a novel and a bit disturbing take on same-size “digestion” in the womb.
Posted by LemonBarb 4 years ago Report
To be fair, I did it under two lenses. Lens A: Being an experiment in an alternative manner/way of digestion, that isn't cum or uterine absorption based (though at the likely expense of stretching believability to a degree). And if I continue playing with this lens, might do alternative scope. Like say for instance, if the released ovaries 'filled/covered' the predators body, would she experience a massive internal rejuvenation? Or perhaps, something more beneficial to her biology? And could it be intentional to implant her own DNA to a potential passenger, internally, or externally...
While as for escalation, it's part of the cue for if I go far enough on this snippets, to set up a possible future victims, or 'meals' if going on an escalation. And no doubt if going on a higher stakes, can potentially let me tackle hypothetical, arbitrary issues over the possible issues to be dealt with, as a hypothetical sex actor, per say.
Either way. One more thing I'd say for certain if making another snippet in this series. I have in mind, an idea to take based on what I recall of the "Max123" Commission/genre 'take', per say... ;)
Posted by LemonBarb 4 years ago Report
As an additional thought, if I were being far more creative (forgot to add this in the initial post.) If done 'benevolently', it might be used like a sort of 'breakfast' food, or possible for enabling same sex pregnancy, if assuming, an 'implanted' ovary reached a passenger's womb, per say. But it's all wait and see...
But on more benevolent ends, it's probably going to be for more selfish interests/bias, on our (currently nameless) "Whore". That, and above all else, with her recent upgraded abilities, she's likely still going to be on quote a biological learning 'curve'...
Posted by Groblek 4 years ago Report
With the ability you’ve shown to transform the genetics of a victim using the pred’s eggs, there are definitely a lot of possibilities, both benevolent and not.
Posted by LemonBarb 4 years ago Report
Yeah, the possibilities and ideas, I likely have in loose notes... Somewhere. That I may or may not expand in due time (to a possible rival/parraell story, of possible "threat" to deal with, in a predatory manner). If anything, I've had a trickle of ideas on possibly covering that them, in a Part 4 "aftershow". But I'll leave it for when I'm able to max on it... ;)
If anything, I got a Part 5+ or so idea, that'd likely involve the "original" of a struggling/angry Red/ginger haired victim, that no doubt has rubbed of enough on our nameless cam whore, that she might consider doing to her in real-size unbirth, now that she has no 'worries' on not abiding by the law (since in a roundabout manner, she's marked for death after indulging in revenge vore, here.) But eh, I'll wait until if I go on a snippet series on this still, before I indulge on that, alongside other key plot points, to serve as added tension.
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One last thing, that wouldn't cover anything related to the story "as is" (and an attempt at a bit more 'cruelty', instead of passive apathy from our Predator here). Is I'm thinking in hindsight, odds are the 'actor' herself might have a "can't remember/identify any names" disorder, that I might consider expanding on one day...
Give or take, an "excuse" to go by "the titles", instead of even names in the general narrative. Unless I go and pull an important name bomb shell, that'd still be brushed off by the Hellsing-lite narrative. ;)
Posted by RachelBabe 4 years ago Report
The G-virus continues to plague the world, even after Leon Kennedy defeated it a million times.
Posted by LemonBarb 4 years ago Report
'fraid this ain't Resident Evil. Unless by that, you mean "Mad Scientist Ruined Everything" being news of the week? In which case, wish said Mad Scientist gives us more 8 feet tall Giantess Vampiresses...
Posted by RachelBabe 4 years ago Report
I was making a reference to RE, since it's the kind of weird mutation that you'd see there.
Posted by Xabab 4 years ago Report
Holy shit, man. The assumption that it happens in the irl universe (or at least something close to it) is terrifying. This whole story is trully disgusting and sends chills down the spine, but, I assume, both are by "by design".
You did a very good job. Especially on the cruel part.
P.S. but really, goddamn, I want that detective to succeed
P.P.S. Any chance for a tame sidestory about volunteer and her two clones?
Posted by LemonBarb 4 years ago Report
On those parts, I'm going by three lenses.
A: I'm going "arbitrary" IRL here. If I did so otherwise, it'd more likely be under the lens of "any" vore (especially fatal) being illegal. To say nothing on likely regulations and such that'd be slapped on any attempted technology/'excuse', likely being cracked down harder.
B: In two lenses, by and large in comparison to some other predators or "monsters", the whore is overall 'tame' (view count and lifestyle aside.) However, conflict wise, she's probably damned enough to be marked for death. Now, whenever it leads to being hit with a death sentence, or a bigger meal... Is another story. Likely hidden by henchmen and thugs she's under the employ off. As much as a looming dagger on how much Max123 analogs I can make, if/when I continue this series of 'snippets'.
C: ... Funny thing for you to say that. ;)
Though if it's on an earlier aftershow I wrote? I'd likely state instead, it's probably a case of "don't show/tell" on their fate, since I'm going on the premise of 'living' clones, being illegal in that setting. Probably best to imagine awkward, yet more solid chance of life. Compared to "statistical" amounts of clones, digested per 'show'.
... Or at least, far less likely to cause a ripple effect unless hounded by a desperate Detective, at a push. In which case, hope the clone's aren't noticed, or reported on.