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From the moment I understood the weakness of my flesh, it disgusted me. I craved the strength and certainty of steel. I aspired to the purity of the blessed machine. Your kind cling to your flesh as if it will not decay and fail you. One day the crude biomass you call a temple will wither, and you will beg my kind to save you.
But I am already saved. For the Machine is Immortal.
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Posted by NomNexus 4 years ago Report
Foreshadowing with Nadalia and Strea? Melody with the symbiote? Also, a nice tie in with your other series and Lauren's hate on fecal matter.
Posted by VoidInVoid 4 years ago Report
I did say that Lauren would be willing to kill to prevent that stuff. Would you believe me if I said I already had that scene planned back then?
Posted by NomNexus 4 years ago Report
Lauren already showed off her hate and this just further cements it. It would be funny if someone tries something similar, but instead of crap, the excess becomes magic power or something like that, and Lauren realizes it too late as her friends look at her in disappointment.
So foreshadowing with the feral slimes and bratty Pawkin?
Posted by ThreeStrikes 4 years ago Report
Is Strea that Pawkin from the boarding house Nadalia stayed at?
Posted by NomNexus 4 years ago Report
No, it was a different one.
Posted by ThreeStrikes 4 years ago Report
Oh, ok.... Would have been funny if it was tho
Posted by NomNexus 4 years ago Report
An interesting plot twist, but Nadalia didn't recognize Strea when she appeared and denied it was her at the shelter, both in person and appearance.
Posted by ThreeStrikes 4 years ago Report
I do have a question tho.... If someone from our universe wound up in Lauren's general vacinity, would she just change them to remove scat.... Or just kill them?
Posted by VoidInVoid 4 years ago Report
Change them. She's more concerned about people actively attempting to introduce stuff like that.
Posted by brennen 2 years ago Report
So, Harland is going to be the big bad this time around.