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The very next experiment that took place right after #23.

A little bit longer compared to the previous one but there was quite some stuff to go through.

Comments and criticism are welcomed ^^

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doomed

Posted by doomed 4 years ago Report

Awesome, although I am surprised she didn’t fully digest her . Seems cheaper

carlj

Posted by carlj 4 years ago Report

I thought about it, but i think this better portrait her indifference towards guinea pigs. The fact that she survived longer and was able to be extracted relatively well it's a proof that they were making progress with the anti-acid, so letting her die was pointless. Don't worry i got something stored up for her to be merciless, namely early tests with this anti-acid and other stuff.
Also she might have saved her, but some poor scientist on the team is going to get gurgled for this failure, so there's that.
Glad you liked it though ^^

doomed

Posted by doomed 4 years ago Report

yup . i kinda figurd thats why you did it. i just didnt expect thalia to pay for her silence rather than eat her lmao

carlj

Posted by carlj 4 years ago Report

She didn't pay her, she still work for a company and it's better to not let it slip what they do to "volunteers", lest her position might get compromised. Also if she didn't accept it she would had definitely finished her off.

daeway

Posted by daeway 4 years ago Report

My favorite joke from the last experiment was when Thalia saved the company issued jacket before it got swallowed up.
If you want some more comedy in your "Experiment" series, might I recommend a reoccurring assistant for Thalia Schlender? And no, I don't mean a one of but instead a character she can banter off of while digesting another test subject.

I might have an idea for a character if you are interested...

carlj

Posted by carlj 4 years ago Report

Mmmm, i would love to have her interact with more than just her test subjects and "red shirts", so if you have a character in mind feel free to tell me about it in PM. My only concern is that i'll have to find an excuse of why she/he wasn't present in those two experiment. Maybe an "accident" during an early test?