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Using characters I don't particularly like or know due to my hate for lostbelts. So they I'm going more off fan comics and what I've seen in stuff like the new years event so if they are off character that's on me. But I did want to use characters I don't normally use and use some other ships aside from the main ones like mc/mash.
This is as close as I'm coming to touching lb in any of my stories!|
This will likely lead to a series (because I'm insane and refuse to just work on one series)
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Posted by elliotalien08 4 years ago Report
I love this ship! But why the dislike for the lostbelts?
Posted by nervousvampire 4 years ago Report
I answered that question(in a cliff note version) in the feeding mashu story new powers and chains. But for me it's a culmination of everything I hate about fate as a whole and grand order specifically.
cutscenes that can take over an hour, ugly character designs, tons of win to lose scenarios while telling us how super mega ultimate god level strong a foe is meanwhile you can whoop them in one turn, boring or outright bad characters, poor story telling, constantly making mash look weak compared to everything (she soloed herc, gorgon, and many more bosses for me) barely being able to beat grunt enemies. the over abundance of events which can already be welt in north America and the fact that the game set an even tighter time crunch than with Solomon yet three years later if not longer in japan it's barely half way through. and the threat feels like a step down from a reality erasing demon collective turned god, or Lovecraftian abomination you come to care for before the reveal.
and this is still a cliff not for me. I do admit I skipped the story of lb 2 and so if the writing got better than russia I am not aware but I'm also not sitting trough an entire day's worth of still images and probably boring plot. every story I write is a universe where lb never happened and never will
Posted by elliotalien08 4 years ago Report
I rather liked tge second lostbelt and i can understand how some of the character designs are weird, i wont say i love the lostbelts but i do see their charm, the only thing id say i actively dislike... is those really... really... REALLY long cutscenes
Posted by nervousvampire 4 years ago Report
yeah the long cutscenes made writing this hard as I had planned to go back and play the entire story scenes for scandanavia since I did beat it, but when assault of the demon blade takes over an hour for me to watch with just standing character portraits, dialogue and a few sounds. No I do not have that level of patience to deal with another level of cutscenes especially not dozens of them.
Sorry for the late reply for some reason I never got the message you replied
Posted by elliotalien08 4 years ago Report
Its alright:)