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Woo! First story on Eka's. Bit nervous about it! I've been writing for a while now but I've yet to actually post anything here. I've posted a couple of things on Furaffinity, but their tag system is garbage, as much as I might like the site.
So, here's a thing with my first character, Krait. Kobold vore is always good! I adore them as preds, since I like smaller predators a good bit and a flirty little lizard that charms somebody into being a willing meal (since they lack the ability to physically gulp them down) sounded like a blast.
I considered actually writing out the sex scene in-story, but the actual vore seemed more important. I might write out more blatant NSFW stuff in the future, but for now leaving it implied with some referencing felt good.
If you liked the story, please comment! What'd you think of Krait? I was going for flirty without (hopefully) slipping into too stereotypical.
Posted by macshift14 4 years ago Report
I’m going to be real with you, and I don’t know about proper comment etiquette, but this is hot. Hypnosis? Taunting? Carefree pred? That constant belching? Telling the elf how much time he has left before he goes soft? Just hot dude. In my opinion this is good, the flirting especially. You should definitely write more sadistic preds in the future, or anything at all! I look forward to your work bro. Though I would extend the digestion scenes in the future, because that’s where you can get the most bang for your buck with it, with the prey panicking and the pred in utter bliss and yadda yadda yadda...
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Posted by Drakeral 4 years ago Report
Thank you! I'm esctatic you like it. I'll definitely be writing more in the future- and sadistic, taunting preds are a favorite of mine. You're definitely right about extending digestion scenes, as well. I'll try to draw those out more in the future if people like them.
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Posted by TravelingDruid 4 years ago Report
This was impressive, especially for a first story. You truly captured the characteristics of a casual and uncaring predator, as well as a panicked unwilling prey.
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Posted by Drakeral 4 years ago Report
Thank you! I'm glad you liked it, and that Krait came across well. I enjoy predators that don't treat eating people like too much of a big deal- they're just having a meal, after all.
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Posted by threk 4 years ago Report
Very enjoyable! I'm usually into larger preds but smaller preds like kobolds acting like devious little gremlins are so much fun :P
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Posted by Drakeral 4 years ago Report
Same! I tend to prefer preds either same size or larger (size difference or macro micro) but there's just something that's so fantastic about being swallowed by somebody that's like half your height or less, especially if they're mean about it.
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Posted by unicorn 4 years ago Report
This was quite enjoyable. I've got a thing for kobolds and Krait is a treasure <3 I think this is only the second time i've seen one as pred, so that's different. I do enjoy the small pred/larger prey thing, it's fun!
Aside from a few errors that some additional editing would take care of, the writing was excellent too.
I hope you'll post more ^.^
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Posted by Drakeral 4 years ago Report
Thank you so much! I've seen a few kobolds as preds, but not overly many. Gotta change that xD The underdog sorta thing is fantastic- they're usually quite weak, so being swallowed by one is just plain embarassing!
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Posted by unicorn 4 years ago Report
Indeed, how pathetic to be utterly conquered and eaten by a kobold :P
...Do you have any plans to take writing commissions? That would be a fun idea to explore...
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Posted by Drakeral 4 years ago Report
I have literally no idea if I'm good enough for writing comissions, so no plans in the future. I'm not even sure how I'd go about it yet xD If you've got an idea or want to discuss one, though, I'll definitely take requests on occassion!
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Posted by unicorn 4 years ago Report
Ah i was just thinking of a scene where Krait and my unicorn OC cross paths adventuring and... one of them happens to be a very novice/inept adventurer who's mind is pretty easily charmed, ripe for being taken advantage of :P and though she's not particularly imbued with magic, her horn is still a sought after commodity in certain underground reagent markets...
But eh, something so specific with an OC is probably too much to request without paying. BUT if you want to discuss it anyway i can send you a PM!
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Posted by Drakeral 4 years ago Report
Certainly!, send me a PM! I'm not really writing for money or anything yet, I'm mostly writing because I enjoy it.
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Posted by grz01 4 years ago Report
That was beautifully written, I adore teasing in vore and you just struck the perfect note - I find it hard to believe its your first story to be honest, very well written.
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Posted by Drakeral 4 years ago Report
Ah, I'm glad you enjoyed it! It's not actually my first story, but just the first story I've posted on Ekas. I've been lurking for a few years, but the gallery system was odd enough that I never got around to it, until a bit earlier. Thank you for your kind words!
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Posted by FitMe 4 years ago Report
Holy shit, great work! The in-stomach banter was my favorite part!
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Posted by Bright 2 years ago Report
Very enjoyable tory.
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