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A malnourished flower girl and a succubus in her prime have a life-changing encounter encounter in an alley. The outcome is not what you would expect.
In the finale, we see the ultimate resolution to Hanna and Lillith's story arc. Hanna gathers her courage and confesses, while Lillith learns important lessons about herself. Don't miss the thrilling conclusion!
* All disposal is clearly marked in the text *
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Thanks for sticking with me up until now - I loved writing this story, and I think this resolution really brings it all together. I really wanted to write something that had an emotional buildup to go with the vore.
Inspiration for some of my favorite elements came from two wonderful stories with unique dynamics with their prey - Yuki's Date With Digestion (https://aryion.com/g4/view/500000) and A Vampire's Boredom and a Maid's Duty (https://aryion.com/g4/view/425192). Definitely worth a read if you haven't already!
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Posted by Observer702 4 years ago Report
Nice ending, you dis good work, looking forward to future works from you
Posted by TableManners 4 years ago Report
Thanks, I appreciate it! Dunno when I'll post something again, but I'll be back eventually.
Posted by kailan 4 years ago Report
excellent story. for me it's perfect. the relationship is very interesting to follow.
Posted by TableManners 4 years ago Report
Thank you! I tried to find a niche I hadn't seen before in works I've read. I'm glad you enjoyed it!
Posted by kailan 4 years ago Report
it s very rare and it s a great idea. I also love this atmosphere of friendship. It's hard to be successful in a fatal vore story. I can only congratulate you on this success.
Posted by TableManners 4 years ago Report
Yeah, you're definitely right - there's a complex cocktail of factors that have to be present in order for non-casual fatal vore and friendship to coexist. This story idea was mostly a matter of figuring out how to fit all those together into a coherent narrative.
Posted by LivesInAStomach 4 years ago Report
Ahh I was actually sad to see Lillith go. But it was such a nice story, I enjoyed it.
Posted by TableManners 4 years ago Report
I'm glad you enjoyed it! Yeah, Lillith was my favorite character. I think she was happy, though, and that's what's most important.
Posted by thequietmanno1 4 years ago Report
nice work- sad to see her go, but who know- as a sucubuss maybe lilith can get reincarnated or something and run into hannah and amber again in her second life, just sans memories of their time together- which doesn't stop her feeling oddly contented around hannah cause of soul memories or something
Posted by TableManners 4 years ago Report
Ooh, that's a really nice idea, actually. I'll have to think about that.
Posted by thequietmanno1 4 years ago Report
I like stuff that lets characters to show up again after their 'final' death with some changes to their personality, almost like a new character entirely, but with recognisable traits of the old them still present
Posted by TheMysteriousSadSack 4 years ago Report
Its a bitter sweet ending for sure, and honestly im not sure if it could have ended any other way. They at least left on good terms so thats nice. Also, it may just be me digging too deep into it, but it seems like Lillith's emotion sensors bled into hana towards the end there. Still, fanatstic story to the end, love it
Posted by TableManners 4 years ago Report
Thank you so much!
And you hit the nail on the head in a lot of ways. Your comment on part 2 made me really happy that I had gotten the foreshadowing down right. And Hanna may indeed have some lingering effects from Lillith besides the immediately obvious...
Posted by rotta287 4 years ago Report
Damn, pooping out your friend into a grave is incredibly morbid.
Posted by TableManners 4 years ago Report
I know, right XD
I like the dissonance between the solemnity that Hanna is trying to maintain with Amber being openly horny and, of course, the subject matter itself.
Posted by Ilove 4 years ago Report
It really shows you really cared for this story. I appreciate a lot that you made a clear section for scat, as someone that doesn't like that it's plenty useful. I loved both Hanna and Lilith, I wonder why you haven't done more writing before! Hope you the best and can't wait to see what's next ;)
Posted by TableManners 4 years ago Report
Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it! And you're right, I really liked writing this story. I actually started it a year ago, and never really managed to get it out of my head. Once I found the motivation, I knew I had to come back and finish before submitting anything else =)
I'm glad you liked the characters! I may explore this world again some more at some point - Hanna's story definitely has some more to it - but no promises as to when.
I've got all kinds of stories in my head, so can't really say what's coming next. I suppose it'll be whatever tickles my fancy long enough to get down on the page. We'll see...
Posted by Ilove 4 years ago Report
I see, getting from lurker to content creator is an intresting thing, hope you'll have fun with it :D
Posted by TableManners 4 years ago Report
Thank you for putting in the time to read it =)
I very much agree, long digestion is really under represented. I have a few more ideas circulating with long digestion - might be a while before I release them though.
Posted by shinobiclay 3 years ago Report
All your work was truly golden, as I felt sad, but also cried, and giggled at the scat scene, but this is some real golden vore literature.
Posted by TableManners 3 years ago Report
Aww, thank you =) I'm happy that I managed to evoke such a wide range of emotion - thanks for the compliment!
Posted by KirbyKirbyKirby 2 years ago Report
Lovely.
Posted by TableManners 2 years ago Report
Glad you enjoyed it =)