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Though the crisis that occurred which resulted in citizens and traders within Garkel winding up shrunken and then eaten by cat-girls has been resolved, there were some people who had to find ways to survive their problems in stature in other ways than getting help from their brownie friends.

This story follows a boy who was mentioned toward the end of pt 11. It was originally meant to be another interactive scenario, as may be apparent by some of the phrasing throughout the story, but in the end I just decided to have it be a linear story about one boy's adventure in the paws of hungry cat-girls.

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Wolfsage

Posted by Wolfsage 4 years ago Report

It's gonna be sad when the story is over, cuz I really did enjoy it.

DrakentheBlack

Posted by DrakentheBlack 4 years ago Report

I'm very glad you found it so enjoyable. I may have plans to continue the story of Garkel and its people in the future.

Wolfsage

Posted by Wolfsage 4 years ago Report

Nice to know.

Nalzindar

Posted by Nalzindar 4 years ago Report

This was a great bonus story, I loved it from start to finish :D
I can clearly see the parts where you intended this to be an interactive story, but you managed to flawless incorporate the various parts into a full-length story.
What I especially enjoyed was the sex-scenes and how Jeffery seemed to enjoy the unusual experience. The cat-girls were also nice, far nicer than I thought they would appear, and it was kind of you to give them a short background story.

I also enjoyed the surprise at the end of the story, and you had two delightful ones. One was that you creatively changed the implied end from chapter 11. While reading, I was until the very end, under the impression that Jeffery would be lovably eaten by his newfound friend.
The second was about his stepmother! The very ending were the people of Garkel felt sorry for the naga who took her, was simply hilarious and gold in my view. Everybody but the naga and the stepmother got a relatively happy ending XD

DrakentheBlack

Posted by DrakentheBlack 4 years ago Report

Thank you very much ^^
I wanted these cat-girls to be seen like monsters throughout the series to help with the perspective of the shrunken and tiny people, but I didn't think they needed to remain in that light since they're just people like anyone else.

Worry not, Jeffery may still get eaten by his newfound friend one day ;)