Posted by Nalzindar 3 years ago Report

This was a lovely story and I really, really enjoyed it from start to finish. There was a lot of sexual adventure in this one, in contrast to other kinds of sword/magic/battle adventures that usually is the most prominent in your stories. Poor Britany had a bad time in the kitchen, but she came out alive (and it was fun to see Pi again in her new job^^). I especially enjoyed the last sexcapade where with the cock vore/unbirth combination, nice done :3
(By the way, after Brendan came, you write Britany instead of Kristen).
And after Britany makes a startling discovery, the chapter ends with Kristen getting a new title :3

Posted by Nalzindar 3 years ago Report

I forgot to mention it was fun to see Jeffery in this chapter too, though his size hasn't changed his view on Brownies yet it seems. At least the cat girls know the different between a shrunken human and a brownie!

Posted by DrakentheBlack 3 years ago Report

Thank you! I had fun coming up with the sex scenes for this chapter ^^

I have to admit that the kitchen scene was something that I was not 100% about, but an alteration to make things make a bit more sense would take away from other parts of the scene - I thought of having Ginger be the neko who came to Jeffery, and that there would be a more intimate examination of Britany to see what she really was. But I really liked the idea that even though Jeffery is a tiny now, he's still human, and sees Brownies as pests just like almost every other human in Garkel.

Posted by ribs 3 years ago Report

ya!!

Posted by Wolfsage 3 years ago Report

Oh, it did return, so glad to see that :D

Posted by DrakentheBlack 3 years ago Report

Yes it has ^^