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And... here we go! The first of many parts in the story of the IVC world final. :)
This is all I've written so far, though I've got the rest of the story fully planned out. In part 1, we see characters known and unknown, and spend a bit of time with them in the build-up to the big event.
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Part 2: https://aryion.com/g4/view/680655
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Posted by Bellyache 4 years ago Report
It's here...wahoo! There's lots happening already. I will be checking obsessively for the next part.
Posted by French_snack 4 years ago Report
Our vore girls do lead busy lives! :) Sadly, real life work is keeping me a bit busy as well, so part 2 won't be *very* soon.
Posted by DontTellMyWife 4 years ago Report
Excellent introduction. The characters are very likeable young women. Even Erika seems to have a pleasant side.
But I'm still expecting Summer to win.
Posted by French_snack 4 years ago Report
Thanks. :) Summer will certainly be very keen to win; we'll see what sort challenge she faces!
Posted by Pabulum 4 years ago Report
If we have only met five of the finalists in this part then this will be a very long story but that's a good thing :)
Posted by French_snack 4 years ago Report
It's shaping up to last quite a while, yes! :)
Posted by Sleepless 4 years ago Report
New IVC. New girls. I cannot wait for the next chapter.
There's lots happening already and we've only met a few of them. This will be big!
Posted by French_snack 4 years ago Report
I hope so! :) Thanks; I'm glad you're enjoying it already!
Posted by Lipsy 4 years ago Report
Yes!!! A new IVC story. I don't know who I want to win but I'm swaying towards Eva at the moment. The way she gently turned down her cousin was quite sweet. What would granny say? Haha
Posted by French_snack 4 years ago Report
"What would Granny say?" is probably always a good way of embarrassing a dutiful grandson, and calming his ardour! :D
I'm already quite fond of Eva too, but there are girls we haven't met yet. ;)
Posted by lazylayjay 4 years ago Report
The IVC girls have new competition with these enchanting rookies. If they don't win they will steal a few hearts.
I have a liking for incestuous vore and I'm hoping that Eva might give in to Leo later.
Posted by French_snack 4 years ago Report
That's a nice way of putting it! They'll set a few hearts fluttering while they're eagerly eating people up. :)
Posted by HappyBlanket 4 years ago Report
The reason I like these stories so much is the gentle nature of the vore. Who wouldn't want to be eaten by a girl like Mariella or Eva?
I'm not so sure about Erika though. She doesn't seem very friendly.
Posted by French_snack 4 years ago Report
Thank you! Maybe I'm a softie, but I do like gentle, friendly vore. I'm glad you enjoy these!
Erika is fiercely competitive and a sore loser. And a sore winner. She may be a bit different when she's not competing, though.
Posted by kbDArt 1 year ago Report
I like the Eva character. I think it would be an interesting storyline to have her cousin Leo end up in Mariella's belly somehow, with Eva's knowledge. If she doesn't eat him herself, her conscience would be free.
Posted by French_snack 1 year ago Report
Thanks! Eva's a kind-hearted sweetie. :)And if Leo ever volunteered to be eaten at a competition, she would certainly do her best to ensure she herself wasn't the one to eat him.