Uploaded: 4 years ago
Views: 12,209
File size: 15.21 KiB
MIME Type: application/vnd.openxmlformats-officedocument.wordprocessingml.document
Comments: 14
Favorites: 42
Android 18 Is Trying To Get Used To Her New Life. However, Scars From Her Past Come Back To Haunt Her And Causes Her To Hurt The One She Loves. Now She Has To Make Things Right.
Android 18 Is Best Dragon Ball Girl, Least In My Opinion. Videl Is A Very Close Second Though. I Wanted To Do Something For Her And Originally Planned A Different Story, Then Halfway Through Writing Saw Maiesens Drawing Of 18 Unbirthing Krillin And Was Inspired. I Thank Maiesen For Giving Me Permission To Base A Story Off Their Work Also, If Anyone Knows A Way I Can Download A Story From Google Drafts, Upload It And Have It Not Look Like Crud, Please Tell Me. I Hope You Enjoy The Story
Link To The Art That Inspired This Story: https://aryion.com/g4/view/502639
Link To Maiesens Channel: https://aryion.com/g4/user/Maiesen
Please login to post a comment.
Posted by deleefer 4 years ago Report
please tell me we get a part 2 with 18 actually pregnant with krillin
Posted by BreadMaster 4 years ago Report
I do have a part 2 in mind but I not with 18 being pregnant with krillin. Although thank you for the idea cause now I'm considering that one instead.
Posted by Nightcrawler99 4 years ago Report
This was rather interesting. I had doubts but it held together well and was really pleasant.
In the sequel, I would love to see her trying to keep out of sight from the other Z members as she heals Krillin. This is a private matter after all.^^
A bigger belly means a bigger wardrobe as well. Gotta look decent.
Some other thoughts that keep crossing my mind are... What's gonna happen when he wakes up?
Where will she be when that happens?
He's gonna want out but will she be able to do that where ever she is?
What if she's in mid flight some place or in a pubic area like a mall and he tries to get out on his own?
OR- What if there's a timer on this whole thing and he suddenly starts coming out at very bad time?
It's true she's an android but she does experience human emotions like embarrassment.
I'm curious to see how she would handle herself in such unusual and embarrassing situations.
What if another Z member sees her all huge? Chi-chi perhaps?
She'll have to come up with a clever excuse o maybe just bult.^^
"O-oh uh.. Th-this? It's not real. Its uh-uh.. its a odd feature I discovered in my blueprints. That creep doctor installed it.. yeah.... Seams to be a sort of.. Pregnancy.. simulator..... Please don't call Bulma or say anything!" Blasts off at moch 1 with a beat red face. Lol^^
Posted by BreadMaster 4 years ago Report
Hmmm, these are some interesting suggestions. A lot of possibilities with them too. Hmm, lots of story potential even I didn't expect. I appreciate the feedback and the suggestions either way.
Posted by Nightcrawler99 4 years ago Report
If your really into the DBZ universe I Had an idea you might like to pursue.
Ub with Launch
Posted by BreadMaster 4 years ago Report
An interesting idea, might need to do some brainstorming with that but I can keep in mind.
Posted by Nightcrawler99 4 years ago Report
Here's my thinking..
Launch has two personalities and isn't in control of when she switches between them.
In fact, she doesn't even seam to notice when she switches. Its like a black out for the other half.
Innocent blue haired launch has no clue what her more evil and mischievous blond side does after a sneeze.
One moment she could be helping an elderly lady cross a street two sneezes later she is in the middle of a dessert with loads of stolen money she doesn't even remember steeling.
My thinking is... What if blond Launch ub's someone? Like she plans this out as a sneaky way to rob some place dry with a partner. No one would suspect a pregnant woman as the thief.
Things go as planned but before she can let them out she sneezes.
Goody goody blue hair would suddenly find herself with a big belly and think she's pregnant.^^ Not a clue as to how. lol^^
Posted by BreadMaster 4 years ago Report
Huh, that's, actually a really good idea, I like it.
Posted by ItachiUchiha 4 years ago Report
can you do bulma unbirthing kid gohan?
Posted by BreadMaster 4 years ago Report
If I can think of a scenario, probably
Posted by ItachiUchiha 4 years ago Report
ok if you need help i can pm you if you need the help tho i am not a writer i do get ideas like one
Posted by BreadMaster 4 years ago Report
Sure, if you want to.
Posted by ItachiUchiha 4 years ago Report
you pm me