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Launch wants to steal a jewel but before she can steal it, it's stolen by a Maron. Launch wants to steal it back but needs help and asks Fortuneteller Baba for assistance. Unfortunately for Launch, the heist may not go according to plan.
This idea was given to me by Nightcrawler99. If you have any story suggestions, feel free to leave them in the comments and hopefully I won't take 4 months to do them. Sorry if the ending felt rushed but I wanted to finish this story before it took 5 or more months. I hope you all have a fantastic day.
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Posted by Nightcrawler99 3 years ago Report
Freaking AMAZING!
Posted by BreadMaster 3 years ago Report
glad you liked it, hope it was worth the wait
Posted by Nightcrawler99 3 years ago Report
Dude it was fliping epic!
The only thing I might have done different was Maron becoming a baby. Sort of like the idea of her being magically trapped in a clueless "Nice" Launch who thinks she's just prego with an overactive child.
Ehh.. Regardless, I loved this!
Posted by kibroman 3 years ago Report
OMG
I have no words to define how much I liked this story
a fantastic job
I liked it a lot and it has been very sexy
I always wanted to see Maron being eaten with `` unbirth vore '', unfortunately there is nothing like that with Maron in eka portal
finally someone has come up with this idea
you just did a story in eka portal, or at least in my life
even if
personally
I would have liked the predator to have been Chichi or Bulma, but I still liked it a lot
Posted by Nightcrawler99 3 years ago Report
I sorta had thought about those two when I gave out the idea for this one, but Launch was a lot better character for the job as she never got much spot light in the show. On top of that her split personalities are amazing! Everything important she does is complicated because of them.
I loved the idea of her bad side unbirthing someone and then her good side not having a clue their’s a person in there.
This story is the very first one of its kind actually. Up till now, no one had made a Ub story with split personalities in it.
Posted by kibroman 3 years ago Report
you just made history in eka portal
great work
Posted by Nightcrawler99 3 years ago Report
Thanks! ^^ but Breadmaster made the story I just pitched the idea.
I saw a door that wasn't open and thought "Hey, lets open it and see what others might think. Try this!"
Split personality and UB. What an interesting combo!
Another idea that spins off this one is memory loss and UB. What if a woman unbirths someone then forgets about it because of an accident?
They could be friends and it causes her to forget how to undo things! The one inside could be left trapped and forced to go along for the ride!
I don't like regression in stories that much. It just ends all the fun for me. I love conflicts to drag out with no sever consciences and lots of inconvenient situations for all involved. Escape attempts, pretending to be hugely pregnant to fool others, moving away to avoid suspicions, having to buy new clothes that fit, having to deal with pleasure at very UNWANTED times....
Unbithing someone by accident, Finally getting them back out, then being forced to send them back in against their will because you need to keep up appearances or the situation demands it.
Anyone wanting ideas feel free to copy and past all this for future reference!
Posted by kibroman 3 years ago Report
I also thank Breadmaster for writing this fantastic story
Posted by BreadMaster 3 years ago Report
And I thank you both for the praise