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Closing father's deal By DarkSideOfTheSun -- Report

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My second commission (7k words) for an anonymous commissioner, and the first of this batch :3 If you haven't noticed the change in my commission status, or the blog post, I'm nowadays open for commissions. Take a peek if you are interested.

It is an important day at his father's company as the biggest deal in years is on the table. But how can Ethan help his father to close it?

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KaiserDunk

Posted by KaiserDunk 4 years ago Report

Delicious story; the conclusion was almost Sterlingesque with the father coming face to face with his adoptive son roasted on his order without knowing that it was his son who screwed up. I wonder what the Papa Wolf would have done has he been interrupted by his son before he was led to the kitchen.

DarkSideOfTheSun

Posted by DarkSideOfTheSun 4 years ago Report

Glad you liked. What does "Sterlingesque" mean? It is a new phrase for me. :)

KaiserDunk

Posted by KaiserDunk 4 years ago Report

Go watch the original run of "The Twilight Zone", hosted by Rod Serling (I misspelled "Serlingesque", as in the style of Rod Serling).