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A sultry naga with a taste for the ladies and a love for toes soliloquizes a bit on her lavish past for the benefit of her latest victim - a sweet young college girl caught at the wrong place at the right time. Spoiler alert, it doesn't end well for one of them....
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Posted by EneomaosTower 4 years ago Report
Hot damn, more of this naga character please! Would love to see you write an extended scene of her handling her prey.
Posted by Narrows 4 years ago Report
Thanks for the kind words! My short story 'Ikki and the Naga' has a younger and more inexperienced Nara gobbling up Ikki from the Legend of Korra series.
Posted by Deegen 4 years ago Report
Amazing read, I love it! Found the perspective change to the teacher and Swamp inhabitant very interesting, finding the remains and confirming the girls are gone for good. Would love to see some sort of sequel to this!
Posted by Narrows 4 years ago Report
Aye - very glad you liked it! I've always enjoyed stories where we see the aftermath of a girl's demise - just nails in the finality of their demise.
Posted by Deegen 4 years ago Report
I feel the same way, I find that vore often has plenty of build-up while lacking epilogue... love having an insight into how the world just goes on without them.
Posted by Guzzlord1an 2 years ago Report
I love this story! Poor Mary, she made delicious prey