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In this chapter Ana and Minx's expedition into the city finally gets underway. This is the second last of the shorter plot-based chapters before things start swinging in a decidedly more lewd direction.
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Posted by timestimes 3 years ago Report
The very distinct, well written personality of Ana s still the highlight of the story, and I'm glad to see there's some development with her backstory being established, as the "bratty demanding princess" type, while fun, can get pretty repetitive.
Posted by glargicus 3 years ago Report
Yeah, I tried really hard to give Ana a bit of personality and motivation beyond being a bratty bitch just because it's hot. I've got some big plans for the next story that will delve more into just WHAT Ana is (and thus why she is the way she is) but if that's something people are actually interested in rather than seeing it as window dressing for the lewd stuff I might try to bump it up into this story.
Posted by Scion 3 years ago Report
ah man, I was hoping she'd devour that council member. Got into my own head canon of demons eating each other for power.
Posted by glargicus 3 years ago Report
Sorry to disappoint, but, well... gotta save something for the sequel. ;)