Posted by BlueMarvel611 3 years ago Report

Hey, NB glad to see you doing your work again. Though on that note, I was not made aware of your surgery up until you told me, man. Seriously I hoped that you are doing well, and are enjoying your new health. Seriously this story helps for me to look forward to what you plan to do for your concepts. That said though time to review the story of the Slime Witch.

From what I've just read of this story, it certainly gave the readers a lot of shivers reading it. Lyla was a young woman who was just looking for her sister Mina. Only to end up getting caught by the Slime Witch and taken to her lab. It was honestly chilling all throughout the story as Lyla had to endure the experiment that witch put her through. Specifically the reunion of her sister, Mina...as a red slime. Not to mention Lyla's own transformation into a blue slime and merging with her sister. Then the two of them ending up in the Slime Witch's belly like dinner.

Okay such a frightening end to be sure, but I was getting chills as I read it. I mean sure by my standards it short but it's still a chilling and nice read to get into. And given the mini bio of the Slime Witch that I saw from her picture, I could see how heartless and cruel she could be. That said I can't wait to see what else you would come up with in regards to the World of Witches series. Keep up the good work!

Elias Azule
The Blue Marvel

Posted by TeruyukiKiryuin 3 years ago Report

Slime Witch is definitely my favorite of the witches. I just love her so much

Posted by Nobodyman 3 years ago Report

Glad you like her! :)