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The Candy Witch couldn't be happier, frolicking and playing in a village made of candy with all the delicious treats she can eat. But, for some reason, the citizens of the candy village don't seem so happy.
By the way, am I inadvertently turning the World of Witches into a horror series? Well, I suppose witches are supposed to be scary...right?
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Posted by MisterEbony 3 years ago Report
Yes indeed. But what would scare witches with this power i wonder....
Posted by gundamfanx0000 3 years ago Report
Cool
Posted by BlueMarvel611 3 years ago Report
Hey NB sorry for being silent all these weeks but things on my end at work have been really busy. Mostly as lack of workers at my job.. But did not stop me from reading your works. So here we go.
Now that said time for your review on one of your World of Witches stories. And I honestly got to say that you certainly have been working to bring out the horror aspect of your stories. This one especially is very scary to read. That Candy Witch's appetite certain is scary when it comes to eating her snacks...snacks filled with villagers turned to sweets! The fact that this village happens to be her former home only adds to the horror...to which no doubt was about a hundred years ago!
To add to this, the Candy Witch's victims add to the horror aspect. Mostly as these gals were stuffed to the brim with candies. I like sweets too but man that's just asking to make someone sick! I could only imagine how painful it was for the gals stuck in the Candy Witch's cages. Given how they felt from their point-of-view, they must be terrified out of their wits given how stuffed they must be from being fed like turkeys waiting to be gobbled up. Give how graphic it is from the way that the Candy Witch eats her meals, no wonder they were scared about being eaten.
All in all this latest installment for your World of Witches definitely lives up to what you set up for it. I hope to see more stories like this involving the rest of your witch gals. Laters!
Elias Azule
The Great Blue One
Posted by doomed 3 years ago Report
So I’m assuming this takes place In Medieval times. Before hand held guns lol . Because a good marksman could’ve easily ended her reign of terror fr a distance .
Posted by Nobodyman 3 years ago Report
Assuming she doesn't turn the bullets into gumdrops or something (don't underestimate a witch)
But yeah, the World of Witches is meant to be in a fantasy medieval kind of setting.
Posted by doomed 3 years ago Report
Makes sense , in a more current setting . The villagers would’ve been the stereotypical rednecks and likely would’ve tried to mow her down. With bullets lmao