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Amity's late night kitchen time By NoNameChef -- Report

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A fairly short story I wrote inspired by canon events from an Episode of Disney's the Owl House.

Art for the thumbnail: https://www.instagram.com/p/CQcF8XwJ8XW/

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Knightrider43

Posted by Knightrider43 3 years ago Report

I like it

Spider8Fiend

Posted by Spider8Fiend 3 years ago Report

Wow, this was fantastic! I really enjoyed how you captured Amity and Luz’s personalities so well, and the humor was strong and in-line with the show. I did ponder in the past whether I should write about Amity’s fairy pie, but I’m glad someone else beat me to it!

If there’s one thing to improve about the story, it’s the use of passive language. If you used more active verbs, this story could be even more powerful. But as it is, it’s a fine story and I think you have a real skill for this :)

DJ4K

Posted by DJ4K 3 years ago Report

Great story. The fact that it's cannon Amity baked a fairy pie is hilarious. IDK why there are so many vore reference in The Owl House. XD