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Well, this has been a long time coming! Believe it or not, this story has been in the works since last October! I'm a huge fan of Hazbin Hotel, and ever since the pilot came out, I've wanted to write a vore fic that does it justice. So naturally, when it came to writing this story, it had to be PERFECT.
... which apparently means writing a 25+ page story! Boy, aren't I a glutton for punishment? If anyone reads this whole story in one sitting, surprise, you get a cookie!
There's much more I wanna say about this story, but after dedicating 15+ hours to the final draft, I'm burnt out. I just wanna thank my friend ruler101 for writing this story with me, for encouraging our mutual love for Hazbin Hotel, and for thinking up fun dialogue for the characters. If not for them, this story might not exist as it does today.
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Written in collaboration with ruler101
Posted by Spider8Fiend 3 years ago Report
Yeah, I thought about how the title might sound misleading. Charlie does go through a rough time with Katie, but she’s not the story’s prey. If I ever think of a better title, I may replace it to minimize confusion.
Thank you! I was at a loss how to make Alastor relevant fo the story, since he does play a big part in the pilot. But the story was already running long, so I sprinkled some lines for him that felt fun & in-character. If I ever write a story about him, I’ll let you know!
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Posted by geoshark12 2 years ago Report
May i make a title suggestion
Charlies killjoys turn to calories
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Posted by Spider8Fiend 2 years ago Report
Do you mean that I should change the this story’s title? Or use that title for another story where Charlie eats Katie Killjoy?
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Posted by geoshark12 2 years ago Report
It was originally for this one ( only meant as an if you wanted too because in the comment above you didn’t sound happy with the name) but if you like if for another story but fill your boots( also great job on the story really liked how it played out)
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Posted by Spider8Fiend 2 years ago Report
Guess I moved past that and forgot all about my concern XD And maybe I will. Got 2 Helluva Boss stories that I'm sitting on, and a third I'm working on now. Wanna finish and post those before I start a new Hazbin Hotel story.
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Posted by geoshark12 2 years ago Report
I only just now noticed the date of posting XD
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Posted by geoshark12 2 years ago Report
Also a story with nifty as pred could be interesting ( I noticed she is rarely used) like someone just absolutely wrecks a room she had just cleaned
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Posted by Spider8Fiend 2 years ago Report
Heh, I'll keep that in mind~
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Posted by HangryDemon 3 years ago Report
This is pretty damn well written honestly!
The way you write your stories is fantastic honestly, even the way you portray the characters is freaking fantastic
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Posted by Spider8Fiend 3 years ago Report
Daw, you’re making me blush! I appreciate the praise, and am glad I tickled your fancy with the character interactions!
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Posted by TF2ScoutGod 3 years ago Report
It was a written really well and I liked it. Kinda disappointed that Katie killjoy wasn’t a pred (hoping to see her as done as one some day) But I still liked it nonetheless.
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Posted by Spider8Fiend 3 years ago Report
I’m glad you enjoyed the story! And if you wanna see Katie as a pred, feel free to give suggestions! If it tickles my fancy, maybe I could write a story for it?
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Posted by TF2ScoutGod 3 years ago Report
Do you want to send the suggestion to via PM?
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Posted by Spider8Fiend 3 years ago Report
That can work, yeah!
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Posted by TF2ScoutGod 3 years ago Report
Well I just sent it
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Posted by narutowolfie12 3 years ago Report
Really impressive story. Loved the way Charlie was portrayed especially, and the character interactions. Overall wonderful
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Posted by Spider8Fiend 3 years ago Report
Thank you for the kind words! They are the lifeblood that fuels artists like me!
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Posted by shadowkira409 3 years ago Report
This is awesome. I especially love the parts of pred Angel. Please do more, maybe something focused on Angel as pred.
Also, Valentino totally deserved what he got.
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Posted by Spider8Fiend 3 years ago Report
Hehe, I’d totally be down for an Angel pred story. Got anything in mind?
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Posted by shadowkira409 3 years ago Report
Anything that focuses more on him and his belly. The rest is up to you.
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Posted by Sleep123 3 years ago Report
So I’m pretty stupid, when I read the story I can see as far as the part about Vaggie threatening people with her spear, no vore or anything, I don’t see a link or something in the description, am I missing something?
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Posted by Spider8Fiend 3 years ago Report
Ahaha, no no, that’s fine. At least one person asks me this question with EVERY STORY I POST. Maybe I should explain this in every description so there’s less confusion?
If you’re reading this story on a mobile phone, the PDF only shows the first page. Go to the Download button beside the Full Size feature and click it. This will open the full story for you to read. Warning, it’s a LONG story, so if you want to skip the plot and focus on the vore, read scenes 2 & 3 instead.
And please, if you like the story, let me know what you think! Comments can really brighten my day and encourage me to make more stories like this!
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Posted by Sleep123 3 years ago Report
1) I’m so sorry I had the be the moron to ask that question 2) thank you very much for letting me know how 3) I tell you this before you read the story, I have no doubt that it’s great if this is how nicely you treat everyone and 4) I hope you have a wonderful day
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Posted by Spider8Fiend 3 years ago Report
There’s no need to apologize, but I thank you all the same. If anything, I should apologize for my tone. The PDF trouble occurs across the website and it causes no end of trouble, but since other document files can get effed in different weird ways, this trouble is still better than anything else.
I hope you enjoy the story!
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Posted by Sleep123 3 years ago Report
????
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Posted by Sleep123 3 years ago Report
Ok that was meant to be a hug emote
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Posted by Spider8Fiend 3 years ago Report
Ahaha, it’s totally fine. Thank you, I appreciate it!
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Posted by TheBottomlessMaw 3 years ago Report
So rare to see Hazbin works, which is such a shame since it seems to be such a popular show! So glad to have seen this lovely story, however! From some fun Angel pred, to Charlie showing just what she is capable of!
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Posted by Spider8Fiend 3 years ago Report
I’m glad you enjoyed the story! It was a blast to write and I wanted to give everyone equal love. Here’s hoping I can write a Charlie/Vaggie vore story sometime!
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Posted by TheBottomlessMaw 3 years ago Report
Oooo now THAT would be an interesting read indeed! I plan to write a Helluva Boss vore story myself sometime down the line!
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Posted by Spider8Fiend 3 years ago Report
Oh? What would it focus on?
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Posted by TheBottomlessMaw 3 years ago Report
A demon version of Martha (The killer woman from Murder Family) taking her revenge on I.M.P by eating Millie and Moxxie OR Demon Martha hunting down Mrs. Mayberry and one of them eating the other.
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