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There's a section of Southfork that nobody ever goes to. It's always weirdly dark there, and going there will get you eaten.
Except this guard has to go there anyway, and things build from there!
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Hopefully I managed to nail the feeling of there being someone like The Prowler roaming one's city!
Also ugh haha, weekends are going to be rough. But hey, gotta keep going!
Tomorrow will definitely flip the status quo a bit, then I think I'll play with things a little more. It feels good to be writing!
¡Orctober!
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Posted by Zacerine 3 years ago Report
Interesting story. The jumping around got a little cknfusing but it was nice. Feel a few tags should be added. Definitely sounds intimidating seeing him digest those guys so fast
Posted by Garz 3 years ago Report
I'm glad the story was enjoyed! And they are really glad that The Prowler is on their side, and that all this intimidation isn't being used against the guard!
And I'm always unsure what tags to put, haha. I do embrace Eka's system of having people add tags they feel are fitting, as usually I'm okay with new tags that are added (Periodically I have to spin through and delete a few). So if you feel a tag is missing, and it's not a questionable one, please do add it! :D
Thank you again for the comment!
Posted by Zacerine 3 years ago Report
Yeah it was lovely. I think only one is fatal since the bad guys are hinted to be digested and he discards their othes. Really love your work. Especially the loving gentle stuff