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Upon falling asleep after having a small talk with her twin, Luna is transported back to the Spirit World where she bonds with her most trusted spirit partner, Kuribon, in a way she didn't think possible, nor was willing to engage in that way.
Word Count: 5,206.
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5Ds!!! Okay, I'll explain this in better detail in a blog I plan to have up later today so to keep this little segment short, Yu-Gi-Oh 5Ds is bloody great, that's all that needs to be known!
So a Yu-Gi-Oh story huh? I don't think I've made any indication prior that I'm a Yu-Gi-Oh fan but yeah, here ya go! Used to own a lot of cards in my childhood that I unfortunately don't have anymore, hell I was probably more interested in Yu-Gi-Oh than Pokémon at that time which is weird to think in the present time.
Just writing this brought back memories of when I watched 5Ds 10 years ago - good times. I only recently learnt from a friend that uhh, it got a second season… so 10 years later, I'm watching the second season for the first time & I'm currently about halfway through it!
Anyways, I hope you all enjoy reading this as much as I had fun writing it~! This story felt so refreshing to write after an admitted slump I was stuck in for about a month, hence why there's been nothing for over a month.
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& as always, the visual representation for the characters in this story~
Luna: https://www.yugioh.com/characters/luna
Kuribon: https://www.yugioh.com/cards/kuribon
Leo: https://www.yugioh.com/characters/leo
The art used for the thumbnail can be found here: https://www.zerochan.net/1955648
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Posted by RexLou 3 years ago Report
Very nice work! I enjoy how surprised Luna is at first and how she first reacts to her fuzzy-friendly meal! I love how the swallowing is reactive and how Luna even struggles at first but how good she still feels once she has that full belly and when she wakes up in the morning~
Posted by GeneralUrist 3 years ago Report
Aww, that was a real cute way to go about having an unwilling pred.
Posted by SupremeToadLord 3 years ago Report
Hehe, I knew if I wanted to have Luna be unwilling, I didn't want for there to be even a drop of mean-spiritedness - have the story be as nice-feeling to read as possible for an unwilling scenario~
Posted by The K 3 years ago Report
Very cute. Luna is a adorable full belly pred and I enjoyed reading her in this. Especially when the hot gas went up her throat to burp.
Posted by HalfTime 3 years ago Report
Love 5Ds (until the final season XD) and Luna's a real cutie, this was such an adorable read!
Posted by Nibor 3 years ago Report
I think the abundance of ampersands (These: &) is a bit jarring. Personally, I think it would be a good idea to break it up by replacing some with actual "and"s... But that's just me.
Posted by SupremeToadLord 3 years ago Report
Yeeeaaah, that's just a bothersome force of habit for me that I do need to break - too used to using ampersands over the actual word. I appreciate the comment, I will try not to substitute the word for it near every single time!