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We return to the vore challenge. This time with one of our four legged companions, who's about to receive an unexpected treat.
As always,any kind of feedback is welcome.
Ps.
There is a fair amount of scat/disposal in this one. But I put up a warning before that section.
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Posted by harpylove 3 years ago Report
I think you posted an earlier draft, there is not any actual vote it just suddenly stops.
Posted by sovet 3 years ago Report
It's probably a problem with mobile browsing. I had to hit "download" to see the whole thing as well.
Posted by Plgc 3 years ago Report
Everything was there for me
Posted by EloquentOrc 3 years ago Report
Ah, I think I know what you mean. The final text is not from me, but is supposed to be the description under the "video" the reader just watched. And sadly I don't any links to playlists of girls getting eaten to put below. ;)
But I'll take another look at it and try to make that more clear.
Hope it was an enjoyable read anyway.
Posted by harpylove 3 years ago Report
I think it was an issue on my phone, it just ended at page one for some reason. My laptop let me read the whole thing though.
Posted by EloquentOrc 3 years ago Report
Ah, ok.
Posted by Plgc 3 years ago Report
Awesome!!
Posted by EloquentOrc 3 years ago Report
Happy to hear you liked it :).
I have a lot of ideas for vore challenges and have gotten more from readers.
The problem is finding the time to write it all ;)
Posted by heromc 3 years ago Report
I love doggie preds! This was a super good one! I look forward to Aria's fucked up demise next!!!
Posted by EloquentOrc 3 years ago Report
Glad to hear you liked it.
Sometimes these stories refer to other characters and events just for show.
But Aria I actually have planned out and I can say it will probably be the most "extreme" vore I have ever written.
Posted by Randomdude5 3 years ago Report
That sounds really interesting. I will definitely read it.
Posted by DancingQueen6281 3 years ago Report
I'm adoring this series. Love to see this challenge going so viral. Gut sluts of the world unite!
Posted by EloquentOrc 3 years ago Report
Thank you, I really like writing it too.
I considered giving the challenge a motto:
"Only YOU can prevent pred hunger"
I dunno, felt a bit too corny though
Posted by WorthlessFertilizer 3 years ago Report
Loved this fic! cant wait to see more from this, btw do you plan on including more scat/disposal stuff in later work?
Posted by EloquentOrc 3 years ago Report
Great and yes, there definitely will be more scat/disposal.
Not in all of them, but I have several story ideas that feature it.
Posted by Baz 3 years ago Report
I'd love to see something like this but with a female doggo pred <3 Maybe a great dane?
Posted by EloquentOrc 3 years ago Report
Eh, not impossible. I'll most likely do dog vore again at some point and great danes are fine race for vore.
Posted by Baz 3 years ago Report
Fair! I'd be up for it, especially if the doggo is a girl! <3
Posted by Kelly 2 years ago Report
This is the real good shit x3
Posted by EloquentOrc 2 years ago Report
Good shit is what I aspire to write :)
Thank you for the comment.