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vitoris

Posted by vitoris 3 years ago Report

What a mean mom, making her wait like that. That poor girl's practically emaciated

Cruich

Posted by Cruich 3 years ago Report

This mother says "grace" in every sentence.

Elpie

Posted by Elpie 3 years ago Report

new headcanon: her name is Grace and she's a narcissist :P

raigekink

Posted by raigekink 3 years ago Report

Lmao, what is she? A pokemon? xD

Plume7

Posted by Plume7 3 years ago Report

Patiently waiting in the back for this abusive cultist to meet her divine judgment.

doomed

Posted by doomed 3 years ago Report

Yeah say grace and apologize for what you were forced to do to kiwi

Altimos

Posted by Altimos 3 years ago Report

I'm still split regarding that...
As a vore lover, I love it...
but as prey myself, I feel sorry for Kiwi :^:
It really hit home in the feels, truly the work of Gokai <3 <3 <3

doomed

Posted by doomed 3 years ago Report

What hurts more the fact that kiwi was an innocent and now she’s dead …
Or the fact that Rachel used her sister to kill another human being …

bobbobson211

Posted by bobbobson211 3 years ago Report

Me personally, I don't really associate the words "kill, dead, murder" with vore. "Digested, absorbed, gurgled" for me have a different meaning and are less violent/malicious.

Altimos

Posted by Altimos 3 years ago Report

Exactly... she was innocent, which is what causes the conflict in me.
On the vore side, it adds to the excitement knowing nobody is safe.
But on sentimental/prey side (because I'm a 100% prey), it adds to my sorrowfulness.
It's a perfect mix of emotion and Gokai delivered perfectly <3

Reff

Posted by Reff 3 years ago Report

Its fictional content, please stop being so upset over what happened to a few pixels on a screen.

doomed

Posted by doomed 3 years ago Report

lmao unless the author or commissioner themselves resurrect kiwi or complain ( which they wont since they both encouraged this when kiwi first died) imma keep talking lol

raigekink

Posted by raigekink 3 years ago Report

Lmao how did i encourage this xD

doomed

Posted by doomed 3 years ago Report

The entire conversation that was had on the “aftermath and a snack” comment section wheee you spent the entire time teasing everyone and refusing to confirm kiwis death lol. She only got so much hype because you kept teasing everyone who was rooting for her lmao

ArchLinux

Posted by ArchLinux 3 years ago Report

that is true

raigekink

Posted by raigekink 3 years ago Report

I've still never confirmed, nor denied anything. It honestly wasn't meant to stoke the fire, i was mostly just trying to interact with people who read my shitty comics lol

doomed

Posted by doomed 3 years ago Report

Exactly what I figured. However your interacting without disapproval is what created all of this . Which is a really good thing . Many comic writers choose not to get involved in fan conversation. The problem with that is when you don’t get involved fans speculate and make theories that if they don’t come true leads to the fans feeling betrayed or hurt . When a writer does communicate even if it’s simply liking a persons tweet suddenly the fan has a feeling of attachment regardless of the writer disagrees . Interacting with the fan just increased that persons loyalty to the comic . What you did was perfect and you should continue randomly popping up in the comments

DragonPirate

Posted by DragonPirate 3 years ago Report

There goes the religious Nut again

pokebreeder25

Posted by pokebreeder25 3 years ago Report

so is the mom next on the menu? or is the sister?

daeway

Posted by daeway 3 years ago Report

Not a fan of mom, but like Rachel, I don’t want to see her get eaten. Unless there is a story where Madison eats them both and is adopted into a better home. It’d be an unnecessary soft reboot, but I’d be interested.