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So first and foremost, I want to give thanks to DimentedChaos for having looked this one over and giving some suggestions and advice for its massive improvement. Seriously, when I finished the rough draft for this initially I just hated how it looked and felt it needed more, but wasn’t sure what else to put into it. So please do not think this was all entirely me.
Among the eight gyms within the Kanto Pokémon League, two are the most notorious in their difficulty. The Viridian City Gym for having its Gym Leader rarely appearing and the Saffron City Gym for its Gym Leader being difficult to defeat. But today three trainers all make the challenge to acquire the Marsh Badge and be a step closer to completing their goals but…
So a little thing before we finish up here. While I did put ‘Meals’ in the title, I honestly just fell into that habit as this story really doesn’t fit anywhere in the ‘Psychic’s Meal’ series at all. But I’ll just call it a spin-off anyway and leave it at that.
Thumbnail is taken from the old Pokémon Card ‘Sabrina’s Gaze’, specifically its original Japanese artwork.
Sabrina, Red, Blue, Green, and everything else Pokémon all belong to GameFreak, The Pokémon Company, and Nintendo.
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Posted by Uchihabiscuit 2 years ago Report
I think I didn't say it before, but it's really excellent the way you write Sabrina as a predator, she definitely has a intimidating aura about her and can back up her man-eater tendencies with her powers. At the same time however, she's a beauty without match, so she definitely feels like approaching a rottweiler you don't know: you can either get eaten or get affection depending on how you behave.
Just really enjoyed this spin off one, who's next on the chopping block?
Posted by DeadStrategicCactus 2 years ago Report
While I have other series to do fics for, I do have a follow-up to this one in mind featuring the Johto Dex holders.
Posted by Uchihabiscuit 2 years ago Report
Looking forward to it!
Posted by rxc 2 years ago Report
Wow, this is really good. The best I've read lately. Your Sabrina is just a lovely predator.
Posted by DeadStrategicCactus 2 years ago Report
She's just perfect for the role honestly.
Posted by rxc 2 years ago Report
I agree