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A story set in the CTF pill verse by LucifersChef(https://aryion.com/g4/user/LucifersChef). Planing to do another one currently the ideas are a prequel (staring Floyd, Chloe and the professor), an alternative version or a sequel. Let me know which one sound the most interesting. Also if someone can give me a tip for how to make sure the formatting looks better then I will be fixing it.
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Posted by something1337 3 years ago Report
I would recommend some whitespace in between the paragraphs, I find that it makes it more pleasing to look at and not lose where you were.
Other than that, very good work.
Posted by something1337 3 years ago Report
Just thought of a bit more just after posting that, but. Typically when you have characters talking, you should write it more like "Hello."
"Good morning to you."
"Wanna hang out?"
Basically, have each following quote on a separate line.
Posted by abeabe1350 3 years ago Report
Thanks for the tip. Will keep that in mind. Any recommendation for the next story (of the three options)?
Posted by something1337 3 years ago Report
My advice/recommendation for the next story is to write what you enjoy. But I personally would like to see the prequel, since that was teased about in this one.
Posted by abeabe1350 3 years ago Report
Thanks for the tip. I had a plan for all three I just wanted what people wanted to read.
Posted by something1337 3 years ago Report
No problem. And you're welcome.
Posted by Bod67 3 years ago Report
would love a sequel
Posted by abeabe1350 3 years ago Report
Will keep it in mind and thanks for the fav.
Posted by KeyteeChan 3 years ago Report
Awesome story ^^
I wonder if you would write story about merging? Maybe abouy a guy absorbing a few willing girls?
Posted by abeabe1350 3 years ago Report
Might do that at some point. I have a couple of stories on the docket. One of the settings might fit pretty well for that.