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Three Blind Mice By AeriaGloris -- Report

A unexpected event brings a group of bickering friends back together.

The third installment of the Genna series.

8K words, split into chapters for easy reading. Let me know what you think in the comments?

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Matanuiv

Posted by Matanuiv 3 years ago Report

Another excellent installment! The relationships between the three friends were very well established and written. Particularly Emma's... development.

If I had tiny nitpick though, its simply that this entry feels very... disconnected from the last two. Just curious. Is Dr. McCoy looking around for Genna? Was he able to put two and two together and figure out what happened to his wife and unborn child? How long HAS it been since that day? Just little notes like that.

AeriaGloris

Posted by AeriaGloris 3 years ago Report

Thanks! It warms my heart to hear concern for the other characters in my stories. Dr McCoy will certainly return in a future installment.

Though, it'll be hard for him to find her without alerting the rest of the science team. He may need some help...

Quartersnake

Posted by Quartersnake 3 years ago Report

Another excellent installment! You wouldn't expect this kinda character building in a story like this, but it worked super well. It sounds like she's eaten a lot of people since the last one, too, so I wonder what kind of repercussions are in store for the future!

AeriaGloris

Posted by AeriaGloris 3 years ago Report

Thanks again for your kind words!

I really want to create fun and believable characters. I think it gives each vore scene more weight.