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A commission from heromc .
A lot of fun doing a story with the exhibitionism of public transportation.
A guy gets on the subway, expecting just another humdrum trip to work.
Only to have his entire POV changed by the end station.
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Posted by Maxchatt200 3 years ago Report
fantastic
Posted by EloquentOrc 3 years ago Report
Thank you :)
Posted by angel97 3 years ago Report
Nice story. And thumbnail source?
Posted by mofvore 3 years ago Report
Seconding the thumbnail source request.
Posted by EloquentOrc 3 years ago Report
Thanks. Don't have much to say about the thumbnail. Found it through a google search, apperently it Abbi Secraa from megabusty.tv.
Posted by Justsomeone 3 years ago Report
that was amazing!
Posted by EloquentOrc 3 years ago Report
You are too kind :). I really try to make my commissions my best writing, so it is great to hear when it works.
Posted by ReptileKing23 3 years ago Report
An absolute, masterpiece
Posted by EloquentOrc 3 years ago Report
That is incredibly flattering, thank you. :)
Posted by BardicLasher 3 years ago Report
Great work, I'd love to see more in this setting.
Posted by EloquentOrc 3 years ago Report
Thanks. I have no continuation planned, but it is not impossible.