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The story commissioned by heromc with some minor revisions.
Which version do you prefer? :)
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Posted by heromc 3 years ago Report
Thanks so much, I really appreciate the changes!
Posted by EloquentOrc 3 years ago Report
Glad I could give the story you wanted.
Posted by ReptileKing23 3 years ago Report
Awesome, bloody awesome
Posted by EloquentOrc 3 years ago Report
'Awesome' is about the highest I can aim for, thank you. :)
Posted by doomed 3 years ago Report
i love them both tbh
Posted by EloquentOrc 3 years ago Report
Thank you, I like both versions too. They each have their merits.
Posted by BardicLasher 3 years ago Report
Good revisions, made a great story even better
Posted by EloquentOrc 3 years ago Report
Good to hear you liked it. Did also rework a few little things while I doing revisions anyway. So it is the more polished of the two by a little bit.